Reviews for A World Divided |
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![]() ![]() this entire fic was so, so amazing. I got so angry at the injustice of what happened to Ash that I was crying and everything here is so well-thought-out. Thank you so much for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Duh Mays married to Drew SHU |
![]() ![]() You are a genuis this story is really coming together and its so original Keep up the hard work |
![]() ![]() Ash hiding from them because they are already happy is just an excuse that I knew as soon as I started reading this. He is really just afraid to face them and deal with the reunion that is completely out of his control. Old Ash would take this in stride, but old ash wouldn't have become such a boon to the world as a Pokemon master Love the read as usual - Vort |
![]() ![]() ![]() Milotic using attract on Aggron was hilarious! loved all the detail given to the sceneencounter. Really enjoyed Ash's amusementcould almost picture the looks of incredulitysweat drops in the audience. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And now onto the sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I spent 2 nights reading till 2am to finish lost master and you drop a sequel on me whyyyyy :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had a hard time putting down this story. I admit I skimmed a bit to get the plot moving. So I will wait to read the finale until it is finished. I cannot bear to start one of your stories without being able to finish them. I won't have peace in my soul if I do. I care too much about the characters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find this funny because if pokemon can give testimony than technically Ash could have ever regional pokemon that he just finished getting under control testify his innocence and Sonia’s guilt. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stop it I’m cring, this is too good |
![]() ![]() ![]() well then |
![]() ![]() My new fear is cleffa Not seen cleffa in action, but cleffa gives me the creeps Like seriously! Also when you were talking about headaches, I got a headache, and when you stopped I lost my headache Now I feel one coming back on |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mother fucking Cynthia is a piece of shit coward, she knows ash would have crushed her for that shit. She better get what is coming to her when you finish this story. I want her disgraced. |
![]() ![]() Verity: Champion? Champion! Why is he running, Mom? Cynthia: Because we have to chase him. Verity: He didn't do anything wrong. Cynthia: Because he's the hero pokemon world deserves, but not the one it needs right now. So, we'll hunt him, because he can take it. Because he's not our hero. He's a silent trainer. A champion protector. A Master Pokemon. Ash Ketchum the master pokemon |