So I don't read oc fanfics often. However, i was pleasantly surprised to find that this one was a pleasure to read. Anyway, nice job, and I hope the best for your writing future!

This story excels at character depth and the argument over the attack is the perfect example. Not a single character comes off as wrong, they each have a valid opinion given their backstories and we wouldn't expect them to act in any other way. The best part, it's not a quick fix like some people would do. It feels like it has a massive impact that won't be going away soon.

I like it, it's well written and not over the top. Keep going!

I like it. It's a good start, and I hope you write some more.