smashing, great chapter, everything meshing together

shouldn't Bella open a window and send whatever opponent somewhere else across the country, putting them out of the fight?

This was fantastic from beginning to end. Man, their were so many talents I could barely keep up, really cool ones too. Rose{Mystic} Yep, def a lot of X-Men stuff. Further I think this epilogue is the way this needed to end, Perfect. I especially loved that he called her "pretty girl" from day. {Not "love" it's so over used.} Thank you Thank you Thank you for all of your stories.

Yes! Yes! Yes! This story is still the shit. I love it ladies. Happy New Year to you both and happy future writing.

Such a wonderful story I went back and started over before reading the epi.

This story was awesome great read loved it

Edward would have made one bad ass firestarter like Drew Barrymore. Lol love this story

I just finished reading the whole story, and loved it. This story has everything: action/adventure, conflicts, mystery, family, and love. But I wanted to come back to Ch 28, specifically, to leave this review. There’s so much emotion in this chapter. The depth of love and understanding between Edward and Alice had me bursting into tears. It’s all written in an achingly beautiful way. Thank you so much for this story.

Garrett was out of line. Everyone knows how Edward feels about Bella, there was nothing to prove. If he asked Edward would have confirmed it for him. Bella’s gift is unstable, someone could have been killed.

Rereading a favorite! Thank you ladies, for all your work on this story.

this is my second chance reading. tried once, but got started on a different story before finishing this one. gonna finish this time

Wow, what a fantastically well written story. So inquire. Thanks for sharing!

By far, one of the best stories I’ve read on FF! I love the development of the characters and their powers!

oooooh I love this .. definitely my cup of tea

loved the story! You are a great writer. Thank you for sharing!