Reviews for Six
MamaNeedsABreak chapter 8 . 9/16/2017
Sweet bonding time between the girls. Nothing like a mani pedi party.
Esme has the dearest heart and was truly meant to be a mother.
MamaNeedsABreak chapter 7 . 9/15/2017
I don't know if Felix or Dimitri's "powers" prevent them from getting injured, but I hope Mr. J put up enough of a fight to cause them some pain. Or maybe even knock out a few teeth.
It was really sweet to see Bella trusting Edward enough to fall asleep on his shoulder.
noncanonqueen chapter 29 . 9/15/2017
dude...this was so freaking good. I couldn't stop reading. Awesome.
princeselisa chapter 29 . 9/15/2017
Great story! It was so unique and interesting. It really pulled me in! Thanks
MamaNeedsABreak chapter 6 . 9/15/2017
Such sad news about Mr. Jackson. I hope karma wins out in the end and every member of Volterra Industries pays for their crimes.
Sometimes a nice long shower and fluffy warm socks is all it takes to make you feel so much better. :)
MamaNeedsABreak chapter 5 . 9/14/2017
Ha ha. I also loved Jasper's reaction to traveling through the windows Bella created for teleporting Edward and Jasper to the hotel.
How overwhelming it would be to go from speaking to nobody for months to being introduced to all the sixes and every employee in their building all in one night.
MamaNeedsABreak chapter 4 . 9/14/2017
How do the bad guys always end up finding the needle in a haystack. Bella is hiding in a city all the way across the country, with about a gazillion other people. HOW?
Poor Mr Jackson. I hope someone steps in to help him. It would be a real shame for Bella to lose such a great friend.
MamaNeedsABreak chapter 3 . 9/14/2017
They just missed her. What a sweetheart Mr. Jackson is. I love that he cares for Bella and wants her off the streets.
I'm a little surprised you guys turned Rosalie into a cat. That was a humorous twist.
I'm not sure which super power I would pick for myself. I think it would be pretty fun to be able to become invisible.
MamaNeedsABreak chapter 2 . 9/14/2017
Oh poor Bella. My heart goes out to her. I can't even imagine what it would be like to have a parent that cares more about her heroine addiction than her own daughter.
It's almost impossible to save somebody that doesn't even want to save themselves.
MamaNeedsABreak chapter 1 . 9/14/2017
Awesome chapter. I'm really enjoying the beginning. I can't wait to see what's next.
Cheers! :)
marigold123 chapter 29 . 9/13/2017
I so enjoyed reading your story. The plot was interesting and I couldn't hardly put it down! Thanks for writing!
Ninkita chapter 29 . 9/11/2017
Ah this was the perfect wrap :) Now I can read it all from the beginning! Thank you both for taking the time to write this and share with all of us.
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 24 . 9/11/2017
Sssqqquueeee! I loved this chapter! So happy Bella resolved things with her mother. And thank you, little Maggie, for healing her and giving her mind clarity!
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 22 . 9/11/2017
Been away for a bit, but trying to catch up on this story! I've missed it!
boopgirl chapter 29 . 9/10/2017
Excellent, as always!
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