Reviews for Six |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Eeeek |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whew |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooooh |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hopefully it works out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Safe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no |
![]() ![]() ![]() Plan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhh exciting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you so much for this story. It was a joy to read. XOXO |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! *fist pump* So glad she agreed to do it. Lovely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Sorry this is coming to an end. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() As usual,your story is I incredible! Could possibly add a section that tells each person's name and their sixxxr power? Similarity like Stephanie did with the covens Breaking Dawn? Thanks for the considerations! Sherri |
![]() ![]() I know writing different age groups is sometimes challenging. Just a bit of criticism - the flashback Edward and Alice seem too young or old in some parts and the current Edward seems a bit too old (mentally I mean). Anyway, I like that that they have powers different to that in the book or added to in some way. Edward seems a little OP though, with the introduction of Bell's power, it seems like it might match hers (in strength). It's too early to tell how this will turn out but hopefully it's a good one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want to thank you both for writing Twilight stories. I have been reading Twilight Fanfiction now for 5 years. I have "In Pursuit" and "Coming Home" already in my favorites and this one just adds to the list. I love the sixxers and the story, only wish they would have had a big mansion like in Xmen to both teach and take in strays like Bella started out. Keep up the great work ladies! |