Reviews for The Last Gift
iStyx chapter 3 . 7/17
This katana thing is very similar to one Russian fanfic, called "New Beginning. Alternative." (fanfic on another fanfic), did you perchance copied this idea from there?
Midnight Angels chapter 3 . 12/29/2016
Will Harry at least be able to free Lilly and Rose to join James in the afterlife, or are they doomed to eternity inside the sword?
PaC chapter 1 . 12/1/2016
Even skimming through it, the banter DURING lethal battles, ridiculous, maybe they try to talk enemy to death.
Your Amazingness chapter 3 . 12/3/2016
This is a very interesting story, although the pacing seems to be a bit off (the story doesn't flow particularly well) and it isn't the most grammatically correct, it doesn't fail to intrigue. Hope to see more chapters soon.
ArthurShade chapter 3 . 12/3/2016
gabrieljuarezl chapter 3 . 12/2/2016
The figth was well writed, the men imagination its his biggest weapon, if not way are we reading fan fiction? Excellent chapter
Vi38 chapter 3 . 12/1/2016
Good chapter
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 3 . 12/1/2016
Good chapter and interesting concept of Lily and Rose. Thanks for sharing!
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 2 . 12/1/2016
Seems the reality of what happened with Harry's parents is quite different to what others think. Good chapter and thanks for sharing!
InfinityMask chapter 3 . 12/1/2016
I hope Harry would be new players/king in the game...
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 1 . 12/1/2016
Good first chapter and thanks for sharing!
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 2 . 11/28/2016
Awesome story so far! Looking forward to reading more!
Guest chapter 2 . 11/2/2016
You NEED to use less comma's!
Guest chapter 2 . 10/25/2016
Brilliant. A good story line and different from other stories I've read. Please update soon.
ArthurShade chapter 2 . 10/26/2016
Very Nice chapter
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