Big problem with this chapter is that King’s landing doesn’t really have a proper sewage system. Copper pipes wouldn’t have really been in use in this medieval setting for waste disposal

Anybody who introduces gunpowder and firearms into game of thrones is a moron.

This chapter is just a massive block of text. Very hard to read

Ah vediamo il nostro amico calamoro darsi da fare per aiutare Westeros!
Di certo adesso per gli uomini di ferro sarà importante seguire il giovane calamaro!
Comunque sia la situazione è interresante!

"I cAnT fUcK yOu bEcAuSe yOuRe fIcTiOn" What a pathetic reason tbh. Author should have found another reason instead of this bullshit.

Shit story bunch of emotional bitches just get on with the fucking story

Big ass pussy he is

Just the guns make this shit

So your SI has canons and dynamite but don't think they should siege medieval keeps ?
He has an army equiped with firearms but don't think they should face an enemy force of medieval infantry in the field ?
Right, sure...
But then we are talking about someone too stupid to stop Brann from being throw out a tower when he knew in advance it would happen, even without being there because some vital machine broke (how convenient) it was still easy : he could have had the tower guard, he could have a guard follow Brann everywhere during his absence, hell why is the tower still abandonned ? If the North is so prosperous surely it could have been use for something.
Same with Ned going south, why didn't the SI showed him and Robert the book on the genealogy of the noble houses, proving to them both that the royal heirs are all bastards when they were still in Winterfell ?

Is your SI really gonna be some turbo virgin who is so caught up in the story that he can’t relax for a few days? Already he has brought weapons that can take down dragons and the White Walkers. Also, Tyrion really isn’t as smart as he’s portrayed, he’s witty and resourceful, but definitely not as smart as he’s stated to be.

Alright real talk- wtf. Why is ramsay so enjoyable to read like seriously bro. Why you good at writing ramsey as a deranged joker type character whos fun in appearance, while the mountain seemed like a retard when you wrote him...

I mean the mountain was probably brain damaged so nvm.

Me: thinking we're nearing the end of the story

Euron apears:

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Granades and flamethrowers in fantasy. This is trash.

Was that an Iron-Man Reference at the end?

When the SI fic starts with the "I was so cool and industrialised the entire agrarian northern hellhole in less than ten years" you know you shouldn't even touch it.