Reviews for Greyjoy alla Breve (SI) |
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![]() ![]() Okay. |
![]() ![]() he used ramsay's insanity to use because violence was the norm in war and he gave him toys lmfao |
![]() ![]() need a background on this genius bro because not every guy knows how to make gunpowder and make canons as well as the bayonets lol |
![]() ![]() Kept reading futher and it kept getting worst and worst write a better story next time please, not this shit mate. |
![]() ![]() Second chapter in and its already garbage why the fuck would you introduce gunpowder? And besides the mc should have been hung for witchcraft/magic with all this bullshit he came up with. |
![]() ![]() ![]() pathetic mc |
![]() ![]() ![]() the story is nice but all the damned omakes is not helping at all. The jumbled up storylines makes it extremely annoying as well. The more I read, the less I want to. The omakes really ruin the whole story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Big problem with this chapter is that King’s landing doesn’t really have a proper sewage system. Copper pipes wouldn’t have really been in use in this medieval setting for waste disposal |
![]() ![]() ![]() Anybody who introduces gunpowder and firearms into game of thrones is a moron. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter is just a massive block of text. Very hard to read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah vediamo il nostro amico calamoro darsi da fare per aiutare Westeros! Di certo adesso per gli uomini di ferro sarà importante seguire il giovane calamaro! Comunque sia la situazione è interresante! |
![]() ![]() Shit story bunch of emotional bitches just get on with the fucking story |
![]() ![]() Big ass pussy he is |
![]() ![]() Just the guns make this shit |
![]() ![]() So your SI has canons and dynamite but don't think they should siege medieval keeps ? He has an army equiped with firearms but don't think they should face an enemy force of medieval infantry in the field ? Right, sure... But then we are talking about someone too stupid to stop Brann from being throw out a tower when he knew in advance it would happen, even without being there because some vital machine broke (how convenient) it was still easy : he could have had the tower guard, he could have a guard follow Brann everywhere during his absence, hell why is the tower still abandonned ? If the North is so prosperous surely it could have been use for something. Same with Ned going south, why didn't the SI showed him and Robert the book on the genealogy of the noble houses, proving to them both that the royal heirs are all bastards when they were still in Winterfell ? |