Reviews for Greyjoy alla Breve (SI)
Dipper chapter 49 . 1/18
Okay.
god eater chapter 5 . 10/15/2022
he used ramsay's insanity to use because violence was the norm in war and he gave him toys lmfao
god eater chapter 1 . 10/15/2022
need a background on this genius bro because not every guy knows how to make gunpowder and make canons as well as the bayonets lol
Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2022
Kept reading futher and it kept getting worst and worst write a better story next time please, not this shit mate.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2022
Second chapter in and its already garbage why the fuck would you introduce gunpowder? And besides the mc should have been hung for witchcraft/magic with all this bullshit he came up with.
NEMESIS HEREJE chapter 1 . 5/5/2022
pathetic mc
winniesm chapter 27 . 3/28/2022
the story is nice but all the damned omakes is not helping at all. The jumbled up storylines makes it extremely annoying as well. The more I read, the less I want to. The omakes really ruin the whole story.
Mend1cant Bias chapter 8 . 1/11/2022
Big problem with this chapter is that King’s landing doesn’t really have a proper sewage system. Copper pipes wouldn’t have really been in use in this medieval setting for waste disposal
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 1 . 1/3/2022
Anybody who introduces gunpowder and firearms into game of thrones is a moron.
Keldore chapter 22 . 11/29/2021
This chapter is just a massive block of text. Very hard to read
iacopo.passerini chapter 1 . 11/28/2021
Ah vediamo il nostro amico calamoro darsi da fare per aiutare Westeros!
Di certo adesso per gli uomini di ferro sarà importante seguire il giovane calamaro!
Comunque sia la situazione è interresante!
Guest chapter 4 . 10/15/2021
Shit story bunch of emotional bitches just get on with the fucking story
Guest chapter 4 . 10/15/2021
Big ass pussy he is
Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2021
Just the guns make this shit
Noy chapter 1 . 9/28/2021
So your SI has canons and dynamite but don't think they should siege medieval keeps ?
He has an army equiped with firearms but don't think they should face an enemy force of medieval infantry in the field ?
Right, sure...
But then we are talking about someone too stupid to stop Brann from being throw out a tower when he knew in advance it would happen, even without being there because some vital machine broke (how convenient) it was still easy : he could have had the tower guard, he could have a guard follow Brann everywhere during his absence, hell why is the tower still abandonned ? If the North is so prosperous surely it could have been use for something.
Same with Ned going south, why didn't the SI showed him and Robert the book on the genealogy of the noble houses, proving to them both that the royal heirs are all bastards when they were still in Winterfell ?
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