Reviews for Greyjoy alla Breve (SI)
Dog of War chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
Is this going to be a word by word, chapter by chapter re-post (including all omakes)?
You should do more character development and add better humour for a story that is a crack fic.
It appears otherwise a bad case of wish fulfillment with modern inventions acting as poor plot devices.
ShaiGar chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
For DogsOfWar - This is a mirrored story. I won't be making changes to it, it's not my story. I am simply uploading it for others to read. AndrewJTalon has said he wants the chapters written by others, that he considers canon, to be included, so they will be. The other Omakes will not be.
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