Are the omakes canon? They seem canon.

I like the Ramsay Bolton of this story; from this early point I'm hoping he doesn't betray Theon. His viciously eager lust for science and destruction are amusing and endearing to me. The twisted bromance they have going on is highly amusing and outright endearing.

Very sweet end

the only fic that makes me love ramsay bolton, goor job man

Good chapter being reading this slowly and I gotta say this is by far the best theon SI I have seen nice work good sir, nice work. Also I know is already late to request and all but I really wanna see the scene where the wedding is happening and the sudden the Freys was prepared to kill the Starks when all of the sudden, every single one of the people in the room pointed guns in them. Then Theon sitting at the table slowly claps for them and they were like "How?". And he is like "Simple really,,,,, I'm Theon FUCKING Greyjoy". Hahahahahaha that would be hilarious indeed.

This has gotten incredibly dull since Margaery entered the picture.

Huzzah!

It's funny that the most interesting people in this fic are the side characters.

So much world building...just to get more metaphorical pussy. Even if it was OP, it was still funny and enjoyable. But the author is male and, apparently, all males can only think of is boobs, ass, and pussy. They can't write a decent fic without cheap harems. And, they complain when everyone and their grandmother think they are more dick than brains or atleast posessing any decent personality at all.
Tsk.

fucking worst fic ever don't read

fucking shit

I would read a book about the reasons things floated in water.

Re-read this story at least 3 times. *sigh* I want more *cries*

Till you find the time to take these damn Omakes out, I'll find other things to read. I cant tell whats story and what's omakes. This is bullshit.

Again. Whats Omake, and whats story. Cant tell at this point. Very annoying.