So no second fanfic and I wish we could’ve seen how it would’ve played in the 2nd one

Not a bad start to the story! This kid Damon having a crush on Ariel can make for an interesting plot point. :)

Awesome story! Exciting to read and the plot is fantastic. Also loved the imagery which helps bring the story to life. Keep it up!

Yay! A great story and great ending! Loved this all. I wouldn't mind seeing a sequel if possible.

The Little Mermaid is my all time favorite Disney movie. I like how u made it your own! plz make more!

WHAT IS THIS CRAP!

GREAT CHAPTER! So Ariel does indeed love Damon! Interesting!

And OH NO! They have to go after Ursula quickly!

Oh wow! Great chapter! I loved this! Looks like Ursula is up to no good. I wonder what she meant by "precautions"...? Update again soon! I wanna know what'll happen next!

This story is SO GOOD! Please update soon! I'm looking forward to the next update!

OMG! Loved this. Especially where Ariel gave Damon a small peck on the cheek. So cute!

That Sebastian. Funny little crab.

I never liked Triton all that much. He's just not understanding towards Ariel's curiosity for human things. *sigh* Talk about unsupportive.

Whoa! Close shave with that shark!

An interesting start! I always loved the Little Mermaid!

I love it already! I can't wait for the next chapter!