Reviews for Somebody Up There Likes Me |
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Gunsword chapter 14 . 7/30/2023 Oh I see so what I'm getting is that the harem is pretty much dead, because we know Bell got tunnel vision because of Ais when she saved him, but now he has it for Freya and no one crosses or escapes Freya. |
Gunsword chapter 13 . 7/30/2023 Not gonna lie making Bell join a familiar kinda defeats the original plot point that your story revolves around. (also you must be a yandere enjoyer, to choose the familiar with the yandere goddess, I mean she stalks him and killed people that were interested in Bell, he almost died because of her shenanigans.) |
Luciendar chapter 4 . 6/30/2023 I certainly get what you were going for they're at the end, but Bell running away from Aiz came off as very forced. I'm a bit surprised you did so as well. It doesn't fit his new personality at all. I get you ate going for an, "at his wit's end" vibe, but it doesn't fit were the guy who challenged a Monster Rex, a minotaur, and adventures with no blessing. I'm honestly surprised you felt the need to go canon there. You're usually more creative. I know that sounds mean, but I couldn't think of a way to say it that sounds better in text. |
Luciendar chapter 3 . 6/29/2023 In enjoying the story quite a bit. Still, the ability sounds like a pretty basic berserker ability which is pretty lousy honestly. No offense, but there are plenty of easy ways to defeat berserkers. Realistically speaking, it just seems that a rage skill is pretty pitiful to be some grand exotic skill, especially when he's lightly armored, agile, and an intelligent fighter. I think I'd have called the top skills esoteric instead. Just a random thought. Keep up the good work. |
Ddd chapter 1 . 4/15/2023 Why the fuck couldn't you make a 3rd person POV |
PanzerkampfwagenVI chapter 1 . 3/29/2023 Continuethe fic |
Stratre chapter 17 . 3/1/2023 this was a fun read the cliffhanger tho i hope you come back to this story i enjoyed it alot and would love too see it finished thanks for writing it :) |
ICBPenguin chapter 6 . 2/28/2023 The zero to hero reference killed me o |
reptoholic chapter 17 . 2/26/2023 So much potential. Keep up the amazing work. Really hope Freya spills the beans on the pseudo loki |
reptoholic chapter 16 . 2/26/2023 Can’t wIt |
reptoholic chapter 15 . 2/26/2023 Hope he can control it |
reptoholic chapter 14 . 2/26/2023 Really hope she stays on top and you keep the Freya pairing. |
reptoholic chapter 13 . 2/26/2023 Nooo hope he is not forced to leave |
reptoholic chapter 12 . 2/26/2023 Huesssss |
reptoholic chapter 11 . 2/26/2023 Lmfao |