nice story but that thing with the drag on and his parents just came out of no where. like and added plot when your writing this chapter

Hey! Please Don't Abandon This Project Like The Crimson Conqueror By Heavenspen I Know You're In College And A Huge Addict To Video Games ( like me ) But Please Your Stories Are Great And Captures the Image You Want You're Viewers To See:

BTW if you can, can you make near the ending like this:
The Loki Familia Discovers the whereabouts of the One Eyed Black Dragon and Posted it in the Guild, Suffering defeat and barely making it alive because of their encounter they were recruiting other higher lvl 6 adventurers to join the raid. It is the talk of the town of course Bell Easily hears the rumors and asks Eina if it was true with a sad look Eina agrees and looks at the ground as she slowly faces Bell, with a grin Bell dashes out of the Guild before Eina can speak with a hand raising at him, Upon reaching the gates Bell expected the front to be filled with other adventurers, there he sees Loki and Riveria talking about how no one wants to join, with a panting look Bell approaches Loki if he can join the upcoming raid within 2 months, Loki with a smirk doesn't agrees and Bell Stutters, W-why, Because You're a No-level you don't have the skills nor power to battle that thing even we suffered causalities, B-but, no means no, Bell bows and yells, I'LL DO ANYTHING, with a smirk Loki asks if he could join her familia, in an instant Bell answers, I'll do it, he stutters, w-wait WHAT!

Note: I'm sorry if the way I try to capture the image of the scene is crappy... It's my secon time trying to make this sort of stuff

So, he lost his parents to the One-eyed Dragon, huh? Sounds similar to the backstory of a certain Saberface expy from Dungeon Oratoria. Are you going with the "Aiz and Bell are siblings" theory? That's actually a great idea, especially if you make Freya as main heroine. I find Bell's "crush" in canon a bit weak in terms of romance, so keeping the relationship platonic between him and Aiz is a more satisfactory option.

Danmachi is one of my favorite light novels and this is one my favorite fanfiction keep up the good work.

Please stop making Bell a doormat...

okay the story and your writing is excellent but characters you chose to bring to the spotlight from Canon are very annoying it's like bell just gets manhandled physically or mentally by women every chapter I would prefer characters like Riviera or aiz Loki etc but you are not even giving them any screentime but focus on those manipulative bitches and now you are introducing amazons and I can just imagine she and her comrades will look down on him and insult him and bell will take it like the doormat he is maybe even blush and give a cheesy one liner sigh I am not flaming I just hate to see mc getting walked on and manipulated so easily anyway thanks for the read I hope you continue to update this story
ps use grammarly free version for grammatical errors I use it in all of my projects

dude why so much spotlight to Freya she is annoying as hell and so many manipulative bitches all around him Freya literally endangered bell and civilian lives just for her selfishness pls don't make him join her

fcking manipulative whores the both of them they are playing with life and death of a person not just flirting I wish both Freya and syr would just drop dead selfish bitches

can anyone make a crossover story between danmachi and eragon (the one from the book)

Heyyy, Destiny 2 reference.

I love where this is going. Those secret rooms with monster rexs are awesome. And the fact that Bell isn't strong enough to take on just about anything makes for a great story.

Excellent chapter! I wish I had more to read and don't worry I hardly see any glaring mistake in your gramme.

Okay, firstly, epic chapter. You really did well in making Bell a strong familialess adventurer and actually HAVE personality. Also great in my opinion that you didn't make him into some Gary Stu as every author has that choice. What I'm wondering is something about the knives. How did the ape not bond with the knives after so much blood contact. Would only bell's blood work or is it only human blood or something else? All around though enjoyable chappie

I'm glad this was updated. I find it enjoyable and I cannot wait for the next chapter.

If I may, I recommend using a web program called Hemingway. It is used to help with writing and it can help with grammar. Also, I believe it is free. Hope it helps if you choose to use it.

If you are doing a harem, please make it small, but intimate. The bigger a harem gets, the harder it is to make emotional connections and actual character development. Instead, you have a bunch of useless lemons. Making a smaller harem leads to better character development and, I would say, better plot development. If you can, please let Ryuu be in there. I've always liked her tragic background and her experience as a former adventurer can help Bell.

It’s goood:):):):):)