can't wait doing great especially since most havent updated in forever looking forward to ch. 9

I love this story but Jesus please do some editing and proofreading or get a beta reader. As for plot, you may want to go back and make Bell like 17 or something so that the romance and 'ecchiness' is less weird.

What I like most about this story is the fact that I can see him getting a harem that I would enjoy reading about; the kind of harem that competes for Bell's attention and loves Bell not each other. I get so tired of the harems that are just giant yuri fests, come on I wanted to read about a hero getting girls not the hero's girls getting each other.

Excellent like always please continue again as soon as you can, also I would like to see a Kancolle fic.

sweet .. hope u make a harem kancolle fanfic.. rarely see em for some reason where most pairings are yuris.. where is the admirals love :O

This has been one of your best chapters so far! I get why he was mad, depressed, and sad by being lied and abandoned by his grandpa/Zeus, but why wasnt he also happy? A god took care of an orphane for 14 years!
And also now he has answers for himself about some stuff and abilities, and also knows about his parents, one amazing mother who also was a powerful leader and an uprising father with all what an assassine, scout, and a hunter would love!

Thx for the update!

Chapter lovely as always. Your fleet sounds great also. Anyway, can't wait for you to finish up the chapter. Until then, ja ne

This was a great chapter,
Please keep up the awesome work.

Great chapter, I also enjoy the great deviation from the canon series.

Oh the possibilities...

It's goooood:):):):):):):):)

Day 2454, the war against the gods has escalated. Outnumbered and outgunned me and mine men will make a last stand against the elves and their gods. Memoirs of the traitor hero Lieutenant colonel Hans Günsche.
Day 3000 only I remain to fend off the pointy eared bastards. This is most likely last entry.
Day 7660. There was a prison riot and during that I escaped to countie waging war from the outside
Day 8000 after blowing up the entire country, I have been summoned to another world to go kill the demon lord as a hero. However i was betrayed by the ones that summoned me and left to do they know that I have 65 years of combat experience on the frontline

I like the pacing of the story as it is. In fact, him find out about zeus and his parents could lead off to so many things that is glad about that part. I'm still curious as to whether this will be a harem. Or triangle. I can't wait for aiz to be a bigger part of the story. I'm excited for the future of this fic. Great update here

Eyy your back! \o/

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