| Reviews for Somebody Up There Likes Me |
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   OriksGaming chapter 1 . 3/17/2017 Ugh. You switch between tenses exponentially more than you should(you shouldn't at all) and you sometimes seem to forget whether you're writing in first or third person. This is painful to read; I like the concept, but the actual writing could use a lot of editing. |
| Struggle Is Real chapter 7 . 3/17/2017 New reader of this story just passing by here :) |
| Ravens Roost chapter 1 . 3/14/2017 actually, you have a point about the gods being sble to have children, but did you know thatSPOILERS SORRYIn episode 13 Hermes actually mentioned Bell being Zeus's grandson |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2017 Hey great story I've read other comments and have seen people telling you to do this and stop that but honestly I think that's what makes this story uniquely yours just keep doing what your doing I've read many fanfics and this is one with incredible potential awesome job just wanted to let you know that. Sincerely RC |
| keyorifan99 chapter 7 . 3/10/2017 Really like your work, but sometimes you get a bit too descriptive. Also, will you introduce characters like Hermes or his familia? |
| Verno SSS chapter 5 . 3/7/2017 You gotta drop the specific characters describing man it gets really boring, unless ur introducing and Of then i dont see why u would describe characters that are a click away on google search |
| Notasavior chapter 7 . 3/6/2017 This is so badass! Bell is a total BAMF in this and I love the character personalities that you've given them. I'm a huge fan of danmachi and am super pleased to see this fic! My only question is if you have a schedule for updates? Keep up the great work! |
| Verno SSS chapter 3 . 3/5/2017 Not bad for a filler and progress one |
| Verno SSS chapter 2 . 3/5/2017 Good chapter but u need to stop being too detailed in the fights it get boring to read |
| Verno SSS chapter 1 . 3/5/2017 It is a good start but fucking hell u need a beta brah |
| Generalmoose2nd chapter 7 . 3/5/2017 Great story. It's good to read a Danmachi story that actually earned the favorites it has. This story is quite solid for the most part. The only downside would probably be with the flirting like when Bell knelt down and kissed Syr's hand. That was very cringe worthy but could have just been me I suppose. Also I'll take a guess and say in this story Bell isn't the son of adventurers who were in Zeus' familia but Zeus' literal grandson instead. Which would explain how he is so strong due to his demigod origins. |
| TheFirstSpectator chapter 7 . 3/4/2017 Not bad being honest I wanted to read some naruto and dungeon crossover but there were not much so i checked out this and its pretty good please update it soon! |
| alexc123 chapter 7 . 3/4/2017 This fic is amazing, I enjoy it so much! |
| 6S6D6 chapter 7 . 3/2/2017 God fucking damnit I want more. FEED MY LONELINESS! DEUS VULT MOTHERFUCKER, LET BELL TAKE FREYA'S HOLYLANDS (If you know what I mean) |
| code R.R chapter 3 . 3/1/2017 damn...he got lucky and showed some awesome power! |