Reviews for Somebody Up There Likes Me |
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Xhock chapter 7 . 3/1/2017 I must say for someone so smart the fact that he has no doubt about Syr, her offer about a place to stay or why a monster would chase her is really weird... he thought lied about the daggers, knows she's tricky, yet has no doubt about her having found him a place even though she knows nothing about him... Your story is really good but this just feels off for the Bell you're portraing, just my opinion though |
ShadowKing042 chapter 3 . 2/28/2017 Freyja always wins as seiĆ¾r is the norse form of magic that relies not on drawing power from the elements but from minipulating fate directly |
ShadowKing042 chapter 2 . 2/28/2017 Zeus King of the Olympians leader of the Greek pantheon and avid instiller of the importance of having a Harem |
ShadowKing042 chapter 1 . 2/28/2017 Personality was that of the wind can't stop laughing at reference |
TheMysteriousPerson -0-'-0 chapter 7 . 2/28/2017 GREAT chapter good to see your back in business I look forward to the next chapter (funny thought: if loki and freya get in a cat fight hair pulling and all over him that would be hilarious XD) |
diggerboy4 chapter 7 . 2/27/2017 Great story! Juat finished the anime so this was the first fanfic i have read! Cant wait for more! |
Omegas Prime chapter 7 . 2/27/2017 What's with the dragon bit in the beginning? Is that canon or something exclusive in your story? So Bell will be living at the Hostess of Fertility. Makes sense that the one who owns it used to be part of Freya's Familia. So by extension Freya owns it too. You don't just give a pub a name like that. I was wondering where Bell would live after he got off the streets. So I guess this will be how Bell will be prevented from joining other familias. Syr or by some extension of Freya's will, will get in the way. I can see that happening. This chapter was short, but it's better then nothing. But my biggest negative is that you had a ton of grammar and spelling errors. Still look forward to the next chapter. |
Nanocowie chapter 7 . 2/26/2017 This stuff should be outlawed as a Class-A narcotic cause it is WAY to good to be made by a mortal. This shit is like soma wine! |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2017 You should really just stick to either first person or third person point of view. Swinging back and forth between the two is like whiplash |
DeadMenPlaying chapter 7 . 2/25/2017 Worth the wait it's always worth the wait |
Deliberatee chapter 7 . 2/25/2017 Now that I think about it Syr might just be Freya's sister. I remember seeing that name in Valkyrie Profile: Lenneth, not that I'm an expert in Norse mythology or something.. heh :) Oooh, someone's building their harem! You better get yourself be caught by Freya first, Bell, or else heads will be rolling lol |
Rhivan chapter 7 . 2/25/2017 Well I discovered this fic yesterday, and now I've found it updated today... Awesome. Anyway I really do like the concept of this story and how you've navigated it Bell seems true to himself, and moreso to his backstory, I really like it :) |
FateBurn chapter 7 . 2/25/2017 Great chapter like always, nice to see him meet Freya in persone even if he still doesnt know its her, please continue again soon. |
ZenithTempest chapter 7 . 2/25/2017 Glad this was updated. If possible, next chapter, could you give a list of who's in the harem. It's hard to keep track. On another note, I hope Bell eventually finds out Syr is stringing him along and calls her on it. She should have to squirm a little for trying to manipulate him so much. |
Reginleif2004 chapter 7 . 2/25/2017 Thanks for the chapter |