This was a great chapter,
Please keep up the great work.

I'm not sure if you know about it, but Syr was theorized to be Freya in disguise. Search it up online and click the link that goes to reddit.

Amazing story really brightened my day. One of those great stories you find that just have you reading till the end please continue

Thank you for this

RC

o sorry my mistake at first you made tsubaki seen like a male

I'm just curious as to why u used the name tsubaki for the head smith isn't that name used for a charecter in an anime called future diary? aka 6th I just wanted to point this out

Very nice.

I must say I really enjoyed this story. It has class, promise and above all else entertainment value unlike 98% of fics on this site. Your characterisation was exquisite plus the place you took the plot was intriguing but I may have just been seeing things but you did leave it open for a lemon or two which believe me really shows what a writer can do. I mean on this site some real 80's style porno just seems to be the norm lol

Overall I'm very impressed and can't wait for more when and if it comes. I'm not one of those 'UPDATE OR YOU ARE DEAD TO ME' types lmao

Next chapter! Please.

Ganesha Groot

if only the animes bell was this fixated on building that harem what a nice grandfather he has to give him a complete guide to harem building

Mor psl

You made the connection pretty obvious, what with stating it and all. Still a very cool chapter. Definitely liking this better than canon. Hope to see more in the future and will have to look to see if you have other works.

Nice solution to that problem. Was happy to see brains over brawn actually being fleshed out rather than just said like some other authors do. Laughed at the reaction to meeting that women after his fight as well.

I like how you tell the story as well as the storyline you have created here. Some very interesting interactions along with some enjoyable characters.

Like you said, starts off a little slow, but I can see that it is building up already. I can definitely understand your Hestia as I tend to be the same way about reading and working if it interrupts that reading. Certainly have a solid base going.