I love it when Bell goes badass! Nice fight with the kobold boss, it flowed pretty well, and showed that Bell is not going to have an easy time with higher level enemies. BTW, is Bell going to get new weapons soon? I liked how he had that shortsword dagger combo in the Anime, maybe you could do something like that?

I just started reading and so far this story has been great so far. I'm looking forward to future chapters. Great story!

Okay I like how you're going with this so far, though I'm wondering just how long you plan to have him go before a familia takes him in.

Can't wait to see what you got coming and may your muse forever sing

Dude, I like the story so far and the idea. I just hope you update soon!

keep going! this is great! but make sure you edit better. I spotted a couple mistakes

Pretty interesting start. I would be happy to see an update coming soon.

I find this interesting, he has potential shown and a good drive from the start.

I am wondering though, are you going to make it that he has training beforehand? Given his grandfather (not saying his name in case someone who doesn't know is reading) knew about his desire to be a hero I've always wondered why it looks like he didn't train him to fight.

Still, even if you don't you've got a good setup here and I can't wait to see what you build out of this foundation.

This is really good. I want more, if that's ok.

It was pretty good,I've only managed to read up to the start of volume 5 of the light novel because the people who were translating had to stop because of copywrite stuff,so I havnt been able to read past that point,cause I can't find volume 5 online to buy ether,anyway I can't wait for more chapters cause I love the original,just don't make it so similar.

And magic don't give him fire and electricity,I would be fine with electricity by itself,ice is a good one same with laser magic,telekinesis or you could do something like this.

(Bell was fighting a monster that could heal at astonishing rates with it magic and had sharp claws,bell kicked the monster and it smashed into the wall and killing it,but also making the wall crumble and a room became visible on the other entered a dark room and saw a tome resting on a rotting desk,bell went too pen the book and on the first page there was some writing "think of what you view as magic and you will have it" bell then thought of magic which would augment his body magic that would increase his regeneration and bone blades to come out of his body at will.) YEAH YEAH wolverine baby not as op at the start but when his regeneration magic levels it would become more powerful and with the bone magic good bye knives hello bone weapons that he could create himself and sell he could make blades come out of his forearm or feet or knuckles,.
Okay I'm seem to have drag that on there,got a bit excited,anyway good first chapter I'll be awaiting the next

A badass normal... Interesting.

More plz