Reviews for HP & The Jade Dragon |
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![]() ![]() This is just too familiar for me. Thanks for the effort. |
![]() ![]() ![]() laughing my ass off in this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() enjoying this storyline |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jade dragon are more of a chines thing rather then a Japanese thing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have just started reading the story so it might seem stupid to read this comment but... In chapter 73 I don't think Harry should always grovel to Hermione. I get that he loves her and wants her to be happy but she doesn't exactly has 100% rights to be mad at him for being with someone else. |
![]() ![]() I really like your fiction but it's moving really slow, I also think that your dragging the relationship between harry and hermoney unnecessarily out to the extreme but I am enjoying the fiction though too many females are infatuated with Harry. |
![]() ![]() Definitely not losing my interest! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has to be one of the best stories if have read on Fanfiction. Defiantly Going into my favourites. Keep up the great Work. |
![]() ![]() It is a very enjoyable story, and if some people don’t like how it is developing, then they aren’t forced to read it! Personally I’m very much liking it. |
![]() ![]() Very much enjoying the story. Do note that ‘slither’ is what snakes etc do. The word you need is ‘sliver’. |
![]() ![]() Hot stuff! |
![]() ![]() I see that the dreaded apostrophes have struck again in the words ‘German’s’ and ‘Griffindor’s’ where as simple plurals they should never appear. However I am so enjoying this story that I can put them down to typos. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the chapter and the Boxing Day Poo. Well Done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() just a thought but with Stacy's idea I'm trying to create a faster way of communication based off of the Scrolls for the school wouldn't it be easiest just to do a linked and targeted Gemino charm |
![]() ![]() ![]() You hav to have harry and Hester have a bit of a fling Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease. Hahahahahah |