Reviews for HP & The Jade Dragon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So, in general, I like what you're doing with this story. Not a huge fan of the endless apologies and I'm wondering if you're going to be able to get through the story given that with the amount of excessive detail and expanding storylines this thing is going to have to be like 10M words but good luck and I'll follow along. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the only thing about the gold bars is that this could cause inflation if the goblins are changing the value of certain volume of gold. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() false there are all related by the black side of the family |
![]() ![]() ![]() Found a crungerty error. Hero was with Harry, but was also at the training being put in charge with Hester and Hero in charge. |
![]() ![]() This is just too familiar for me. Thanks for the effort. |
![]() ![]() ![]() laughing my ass off in this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() enjoying this storyline |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jade dragon are more of a chines thing rather then a Japanese thing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have just started reading the story so it might seem stupid to read this comment but... In chapter 73 I don't think Harry should always grovel to Hermione. I get that he loves her and wants her to be happy but she doesn't exactly has 100% rights to be mad at him for being with someone else. |
![]() ![]() I really like your fiction but it's moving really slow, I also think that your dragging the relationship between harry and hermoney unnecessarily out to the extreme but I am enjoying the fiction though too many females are infatuated with Harry. |
![]() ![]() Definitely not losing my interest! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has to be one of the best stories if have read on Fanfiction. Defiantly Going into my favourites. Keep up the great Work. |
![]() ![]() It is a very enjoyable story, and if some people don’t like how it is developing, then they aren’t forced to read it! Personally I’m very much liking it. |
![]() ![]() Very much enjoying the story. Do note that ‘slither’ is what snakes etc do. The word you need is ‘sliver’. |