really nice story and plot! I liked the whole progression

Wow! This chapter really sets the whole book up well, establishing how things are currently and what the charters will do in the future! It’s a fabulous hook of a first chapter. I truly applaud you for this skilful introduction. Few books seem to be up to this standard, I’m truly looking for to reading the rest of it.

okay I know *insert cheech and chiong stoner voice here* "but the plot demands it" *end stoner voice. But c'mon Draco you're not stupid you know why she didn't tell you now suck it up balls out and don't be a prat about this.

I have devoured this fic today and it is awesome thank you for writing

Just watch me she says. Oh gurl I am I love a Hermione that gets like this!

Love it!

Sweet. I enjoyed reading this thank you.

I want to cry

Awesome and amazing

Um,... I think the whole "life-debt" thing isn't really working. Its just not believable. The rest of the story works quite well. The prison visits, the courtroom drama, everyone's interactions all blend together very well, but when it gets into this whole "debt" thing it gets cheesy, overdone, and I'm sorry to say, rather campy. Lavender said it was just like a romance novel, I have to disagree, this last chapter seemed a bit hacked together in a hurry, because it went way too cliche. They just seem to keep rehashing the same insecurities repeatedly even after they have seemed to have addressed and resolved them! I hate to leave a disappointing review but I was really enjoying the beginning of this story and had high hopes for it. I do applaud your efforts! There are some truly impressive scenes here! I admit, I couldn't write even this well, so I've no right to criticize. Thank you for sharing your talents with us! :-)

I'm still lost here but I'm starting to suspect something other than a life debt. To my knowledge, a life debt is exactly that, something you can carry throughout your life until its satisfied. Not something that threatens your own until you meet it. So, I have no idea what's going on here. On a side note, I'm glad a few things have been clarified at least! After all, Draco can't just be left suffering like that!

In what screwed-up reality did that make sense? Considering Draco's situation, I can see it. But Hermoine having a reaction like that seems completely baseless! Here she's been not so quietly drooling over him to not only Harry but Lavender of all people, and at the first proof that the feelings are mutual, she has a complete meltdown and outright denies all possibility? Honestly, I'm lost here!

Call me vindictive, but I want to know who or what gets the warden at the end of this!

Yessssss

Awwwww I love this plot

Hummmmm intense