It's a pity you didn't continue this and your gamer novels, as much as I like jumpchains your longer running novels are far too depressing and edgy for me by comparison.

This is great! D
Why'd you stop?
More please )

Henge has always canonically been physical.

This is a fun ride! Thank you for the story! I love Naruto being on Team 8 and the much lighter tone overall so far. I know it will eventually get darker but until then, this is nice! Thank you for the story! I hope your muse returns to you on this one eventually!

Did they die or just give up for no reason... like this is really good but didn't even get past the bridge arc.

This is amazing can't wait for more. Also he could possibly after enough biomass was produced creat his own house to live in. It will also be fun to explain his abilities to Tsunade and she teaches Vixen more about medical knowledge. That way Vixen can alter his body further to a better degree. Also Jiraiya could help with seal creation to better what he created so far.

Another story I honestly enjoy reading

broooo. How could you not give the virus to naruto? You literally made an oc to get the interesting power... I mean... If this is the story you want to tell... who am i to say otherwise... (it hurts)

I would recommend to change the title from prototype ninja to prototype biju (or tailed beast) because, while this is a subversion, its a less interesting development. Best to let people know early on what they be getting in to.

can u please update

Interesting changes to Naruto and very detailed descriptions. The interaction between characters and development of the action in the story suffers though because the proportion of the descriptions of Naruto interacting with Vixen and developing his biomass is huge compared to him doing something for missions or talking to his team. I found myself skimming those descriptions to get to the parts where Naruto was talking to someone other than Vixen. Very cool story idea... just could use some storyline balance.

cool

Bullshit, what does getting smarter matter if you don't know jack shit on the subject, it's like putting a math Nobel winner to work on surgery, the fuck does he know, he may learn and keep information faster but he should study first

Truly a wonderful story, I greatly look forward to seeing more of this.

I'm more disappointed than I thought I'd be that there isn't more of this story to read. Far too many times I've run into Blacklight!Naruto stories and seen them be fairly unimaginative 'Alex Mercer with Naruto's face and personality' and nothing else. Nothing new at all. Just Naruto with the powerset from the game. And truth be told, that powerset, while dangerous, doesn't actually give much of a leg up in the Naruto setting. But you haven't done that at all! This might actually be the first time I've seen someone take the concept of Blacklight and actually experiment with it and I love every bit of it! You've even got logic! Actual genuine logic to explain where you got everything you did!

That said, I did note one discrepancy though. In an earlier chapter, Naruto called his bloodline the Biomass bloodline when showing it off to Iruka as the extra credit for the test. Which makes sense. But in chapter 4, he calls it the Blacklight Bloodline, which does sound cool, but there's no real explanation nor reasoning for where Naruto could have gotten the name from. Why the change? Or was that just a slip?

great story ! enjoyed the humor and interesting change from canon

hope to see more in the future !

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