Reviews for The Flood |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I hate you, I thought we were friends. Y-You, killed 4 people, today. You know that? Froggy, Ryan and me, ALEX and flippinI teared up! I'm watching X-Men Apocalypse, and the music and lighting fit so well with the description. Alex died, and he was my favourite, and then you go and kill Frogfy and Ryan. What kind of horrible person are you!? Amazing writer...bad Justice. *Sniffs.* I hope I yelled at you a lot as soon as I finish typing this review. (Great chapter, mostly, though). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update because no one on any of the fanfics I'm reading are updating and I can't deal without my fanfic so please, please, please update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really cool idea and you're writing does it justice. (See what I did there... hehehe... okay I'll leave and shut the door on the way out.) But seriously, I've really enjoyed reading this and I'm very curious to what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit your stories are amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a perfect chapter. Very well written and under pressure from your school life. I understand how that feels. It's very well done and a good cliffhanger, which makes me worried for the characters. It was worth the wait. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excuse my French, but, FUCK. Ryan already had a fatal medical condition and now you're giving Jody radiation sickness. Yes, all of them will likely get it in the end, but still. Please leave at least one of the three alive by the end! You are truely amazing at writing, it's unbelievable. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() First of all, I LOVE YOU. Second, DON'T YOU DARE KILL THEM OFF, YOUNG MAN. Third, THAT WAS SO FLIPPING ORIGINAL AND GOOD. OMG, HOW CAN A HUMAN WRITE SO WELL!? |
![]() ![]() ![]() please, please, please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That's quite a sudden stop. Please could you update more often. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Radioctive sign!? As in the yellow triangle!? *Freaks out.* Just a thought: Maybe the people who escaped weren't actually crazy. Maybe people thought that they were crazy, because they were trying to explain what happened. Unless, they were literally loopy... Anyways, awesomw chapter. Well done, again, on the grades! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you ended on a spine-tingling cliffhanger. By the way, you're not going to kill them, are you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, the door was there all along!? I wouldn't say that "damn" is really swearing, but that's my opinion. Also, when Ryan was talking, you missed out the word, "you" in his sentence. When they were all holding hands, you mispelled, "split." Other than that, great chapter! They got out of the cage! |
![]() ![]() Hi this is my first time reviewing and I just want to say that I absolutely LOVE this story. Ryan is my favourite character so whenever anything happens to him I always have a fan girl overload! My favourite chapter has to be chapter 7 because I love hearing about their lives before the dumping ground. Keep writing, this is an amazing story and my favourite story EVER I'm so glad I found it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very fascinating chapter. I look forward to the next installment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG, the, "ghostly guards and creepy creatures." I knew that came from the summary! LOL. I wouldn't really call this sappy, just more light-hearted. Anyways, that was sweet. They're all on good terms. |