Fuck. If you kill off Ryan or Jody or Bailey...hopefully the others will find them before anything catastrophic happens.
That was really good - it didn't seem rushed at all.
Thank you for the promo :)

Love this story! I know I've said it before, but it's true! I look forward to this being updated!
I'm glad you liked my idea, what you did with it was absolutely brilliant! This story just keeps getting more and more intense. Awesome :)
Can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Really great story writing I love this story and the dumping ground it will be interesting to see how they get out and if they get out alive I wonder when Mike and the rest of the dumping ground will notice that they are missing

Perfect cliffhanger. I am thoroughly enjoying this story so far. I know it may not have been intentional, but this does remind me of H.P Lovecraft. He used to write down his dreams. Is that what you do? I do the same, which would probably explain a lot.

Awh, you're so sweet!

Wait, you were rishing? How come?

Oh, and, the part that I did, there's a spelling mistake. The wrong word. "There," not, "their."

Anyways, OMG, they are so flipping articulate, I can't even, LOL.

Why am I reading this at night in the dark? I'm gonna be so freaking jumpy now :)
This is really good (no surprise considering all your stuff is really good).
Ryan's a bit of a liability isn't he - anxiety and a heart condition, as well as a fear of dogs. I would write him off as the first to die, if he didn't have the common knowledge and brains.
I love the maze runner references :)
I can't wait for the next instalment!

This story is so inventive! I can't wait to find out how they get out...
Do the arachniwaiths only have Ryan's scent? Cause it could be an interesting idea to have the creatures only looking for him while all three of them try to escape...
Love it, update soon!
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Great! I didn't expect this. I am looking forward to your next chapter. Please update soon!

Yepah, arachniwraiths is a much better name, LOL.

Now, nobody dies until the phone runs out of battery. Then, you're truly damned, because even the dead can't live without their technology.

Anyways, the suspense is real!

That's quite scary. I like your description of the creature; it sounds Lovecraftian. I think that you seemed to capture Bailey's obnoxiousness rather well. I would have logged in but I am currently using a computer that is not logged into FanFiction. Even including my stories on this site, this one is thoroughly unique. Keep up the good work!

Love this story! Good job :)
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Wouldn't the benzos be called xanax?

Oh, is that the little Jody part that I wrote!?

Wow. This is really good. It just made me scroll further down the page. Believe me, I know horror when I see it and this is amazing! I like the fact you ended on a good bit. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm loving this. So intriguing!
Randomguest xxx

Wait, that was short? LOL, totally didn't realise.

Well, it's not the best idea to go down a tunnel. Alone. It's a REALLY bad idea to split up.