Reviews for Skittering Campione
ashen abyss 00 chapter 15 . 11/22
I'm betting the new heretic god s Anansi, also good chapter.
ashen abyss 00 chapter 9 . 11/22
great chapter but instead of giving and increased number of shards that Taylor can access it probably would have been better to either extend the amount of time any shard could remain active or decrease the cooldown for shard usage. another option would have been to make it so that she could permanently bestow shards on others, a maximum of three shards per person with each shard having a maximum level of 5, with the second and third shard either having to be the same category but different sub-category (thinker-zone plus thinker sense) or the secondary and tertiary being of different categories but related in nature (taylor's power was master but had secondary thinker attributes).
ashen abyss 00 chapter 8 . 11/22
ok first great chapter, second letting Taylor keep 'terror of the depths' awesome however I disagree with the authority you gave her for defeating Leviathan instead of giving her Ocean's shroud you should have given Taylor the authority that summons large numbers of sea creature as it would fit her theme better.
RedOuroboros chapter 16 . 10/17
fun story thanks!
RedOuroboros chapter 14 . 10/17
Ahh Lisa how fun :D thanks for the chapter
RedOuroboros chapter 7 . 10/17
good story thanks~
RedOuroboros chapter 5 . 10/17
Godou was a naive high school student, a Japanese student used to follow authority why wouldn't he? Taylor on the other hand is not :D
Foxfire1215 chapter 11 . 10/7
This story is pretty bad to be honest. Taylor is only good at strategy because of her spamming thinker powers/authorities . While in cannon her power was part of why she was so good at strategy; it was just that, part. She had a natural talent for strategy. In this she is quite reliant upon any and all thinker powers/authorities to help her form a plan, and spoon feed what is happening to her. Nothing wrong with that if all you care about is efficiency. I personally have a problem with that though, because it makes for an uninteresting character. Canon Taylor was interesting, because even if something/someone took her power away she would still be something. She was a hard worker, resourceful, and creative. This Taylor would be nothing without her powers. They are crutches to her not a tool to empower her. Anyway, this story seems to be for the most part a power fantasy. Not what I was expecting based on all of the other reviews that praised it so thoroughly, but whatever.
Foxfire1215 chapter 4 . 10/7
Why not though? I would say that Taylor is spiritually closer to Khepri than she is to Scion.
declanbeech97 chapter 16 . 9/19
pity that this is dead, really well written.
declanbeech97 chapter 10 . 9/19
never mind my previous comment
declanbeech97 chapter 10 . 9/19
with ubers power could Taylor lear magic, her nature as a caponi (whatever their called) granted her mana and ubers skilled grants ridiculously fast learning so with someone to teach her could do learn proper mage craft?
Mtari chapter 16 . 8/26
Is the story still going?
Pheonixfera chapter 16 . 8/23
I don't ever review, but I genuinely wish this was continued. writing is great and I love the direction it's going. sadge it hasn't been updated in a couple years
SnappingTurt3ls chapter 16 . 7/4
is this going to be continued?
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