Reviews for Power to Strive
blazevoir chapter 11 . 9/15
I tried to read this, but to be frank, Candy made it unreadable.

Fourth wall breaks, references to other series, and manipulation of an established narrative is all pointless, and it completely ruins the immersion of the story, which is a shame, because the characterization and dialogue of the "viewers" is pretty good by itself. However, when you have a non-entity like Candy that inserts herself into tense or emotional scenes to make an offhand joke, it's just frustrating.

So thanks, but no thanks. Candy has singlehandedly turned what had the potential to be a great story into nothing but a pile of trash. It's a shame that you wasted so much time on this story, only to cut yourself off at the knees for silly jokes in a narrative that's not meant to be silly in the slightest. I only wish that I hadn't wasted so much of my own time on it as well.
imfrayed chapter 31 . 9/11
Hi! I'm new (11.9.21) to , and though it's the first I've read on this site, I've fallen in love with your story!
I'm very impressed that you've managed to keep the character's behaviours/reactions/personalities rather cannon (something I struggle with as a writer)! I have no other words to describe it other than "brilliantly written"!
I can't wait for your next chapter! Having read all the way through chapters 1 to 31 really got me pumped, and the anticipation is making me bounce in my seat!
Don't worry about rushing for us - we can wait, and certainly don't worry about making mistakes - it's all a part of growing as a writer!
SixMagnitudeGirl chapter 31 . 9/6
The Mikasa OVA is one of the most heartbreaking dream sequences ever. It confirmed my theory that Mikasa knows that she'll never be with Eren... no matter where or when, she's bound to always lose himI can't wait for Levi and Mikasa to bondI am glad that Ymir is finally on board. Hopefully, no one (namely the traitor trio) gets sus...
THIS IS SO GOOD! THANK YOU SO MUCH! 3
SixMagnitudeGirl chapter 30 . 9/6
Ackerman family bonding please...
SixMagnitudeGirl chapter 28 . 9/6
They have CANDY! AHAHAHAHAAHAHAA! I can't wait for Levi and Mikasa to learn about their Ackerman genes and hopefully bond... I wonder if they'll get a preview of Eren beating the shit out of Armin and making Mikasa cry...
SixMagnitudeGirl chapter 27 . 9/6
Please say it soon. Damn Levi... Mikasa is indeed blessed.
SixMagnitudeGirl chapter 25 . 9/6
I can't wait for the reveal.
SixMagnitudeGirl chapter 24 . 9/6
It's sad because unfortunately I understand Eren's feelings. When I was watching it, I was thinking if Armin and Mikasa got killed because of Eren's hesitation, I never would have forgiven him. Also, Armin is closer to Annie though.
SixMagnitudeGirl chapter 24 . 9/6
It's sad because unfortunately I understand Eren's feelings. When I was watching it, I was thinking if Armin and Mikasa got killed because of Eren's hesitation, I never would have forgiven him. Also, Armin is closer to Annie though.
SixMagnitudeGirl chapter 23 . 9/6
Mikasa has always been consistent. She's not heartless, if anything, she knows her vulnerability. She says so herself, that she can't afford to care about anyone else other than Eren and Armin. She burns only for those she loves and the others get nothing.
Ymir must explain. Did I think she made a bad choice at the end? Yes. She shouldn't have helped Bert and Reiner. She should have stayed with Historia and lived happily.
SixMagnitudeGirl chapter 22 . 9/6
Time to Ackerbond! Make Levi some tea Mikasa!
I felt so bad for the Ackermans... None of them had happy endings... Expect Kenny! F*ck Kenny! But also thank you for teaching Levi how to hold a knife.
I screamed when Levi chastises Mikasa for being such a simp and when he almost had a heart attack thinking his only relative would die.
SixMagnitudeGirl chapter 21 . 9/6
I love how Mikasa is finally being appreciated! Yup! She'll move mountains for the people she cares about. Hopefully, Levi reveals it and have an Ackerbond! When Levi saw his team and couldn't stop himself from showing emotions when he saw Petra...Yup... Eren has complex feelings about Mikasa.
SixMagnitudeGirl chapter 20 . 9/6
That's one of the most heartbreaking moments in AOT...
SixMagnitudeGirl chapter 19 . 9/6
Ymir's got it right... *sigh* sadly...
SixMagnitudeGirl chapter 18 . 9/6
Levi said it! Seriously? Eren prioritized his stupid crush over his best friend's (Armin) words.
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