Reviews for Provisionally Yours
DJArla chapter 5 . 3/13
A very sweet story
QuillsOnParchment chapter 5 . 5/7/2021
I stayed up until 2am to finish this ficno regrets
Blueishfood chapter 5 . 10/6/2020
Okay this story is just bloody gorgeous. No other way to describe how you portrayed the characters and practically dragged me head over heels into this wonderful au. Thanks for a good read!
waitingforloki chapter 5 . 10/1/2020
That was bloody brilliant .
Guest chapter 5 . 8/23/2020
Loved it. Beautiful writing!
Guest chapter 4 . 8/23/2020
God, the Race for the Vase was amazing. I really love Jame’s mom. And also, did his mom call ”Fleamont” “Monty”? That’s terrible. Just that nickname makes my sympathies what James.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/23/2020
LOVE IT! Not how terrible Vernon (Vermin) is, but…well, everything else. The swing, and the island, and the upcoming race, and their dynamics…
Guest chapter 2 . 8/23/2020
I love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2020
I LOVE THIS. It’s utterly great. Them both trying their utter best to sabotage the meeting, and then being so very on the same page as they complain…it’s great. And imagining JAMES and SIRIUS as, like, dignified people in the Victorian era or something…truly amazing.
Puzzler54 chapter 5 . 10/19/2019
Absolutely loved this story. It's so different, refreshingly so, from anything I've read about James and Lilly.
I enjoyed the raw honesty of the two - it was down to earth and nothing was hidden from the reader or painted as a nicer picture than it would have been. But it's in that place where beauty is seen in the sadness/uncomfortable/forced situation they are in.

Absolutely brilliant plotting and mischief! Really sweet final chapter. My only sadness is that there was no reconciliation with Petunia. Not an unrealistic one, but perhaps just to see Petunia acknowledge that things aren't how they should have been.
However this is just me wanting a fairytale ending I think!
writeringoodfaith chapter 3 . 4/28/2019
I like all the games and pranks they play! Lily especially being involved in it is great. I also liked the kidnap story for adding more depth to her back story and slinging in Snape and Voldy
writeringoodfaith chapter 2 . 4/28/2019
Things are a little subtle (as in plot. Events. Not their feelings for each other hahaha). I gotta pay attention. It’s an interesting take and I like the style so far!
phiphi78 chapter 5 . 10/26/2018
Amazing story, the plotting and the shenanigans were so funny and the romance was so great. I love every bit of this story !
Eve1980 chapter 5 . 8/15/2018
Brilliant AU story, very well written. Addicting. Thumbs up !
thejilyship chapter 1 . 2/2/2018
This was such a fun tropey story. I love all the bickering and the antics and the games. I also loved the characterization of everyone, especially James mom. great story telling
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