Hallo, bin sehr begeistert von dieser Geschichte gerade wie sie abweicht. Kanon finde ich absolut faszinierend und wünsche mir wirklich sehr noch viel viel mehr davon lesen zu dürfen.

Like everyone else has said, probably including me a while ago, Dean’s death is a sack of shit. There is no in-world reason he should have died in the scenario provided.

Stop giving the murdering pirate subtle hints about where you come from you idiot. Sorry i had to say that. One of the things I hate the MOST in fanfics is when people who have absolutely ZERO reason to give someone information give shit away for shits and giggles. Would an “ex” soldier Harry give up information? FUCK NO! Would he use Legimency to get some infomation? YES and not just a “passive little prob” sure he would start with that but after that point he came across no defenses the dude would dive right in as subtly as possible! That is FREE information.

Yuck. A Greyjoy? That Yara Greyjoy? Is Harry gonna collect her in his harem? A reaver who thinks STEALING, RAPING and DESTROYING is their Drowned God's given right? And, she is damned fugly in the books and the series.
There are many morally disgusting people in ASOIAF/GOT, but an Iron Islander is in the bottom of the shitepile. Atleast the others just kill, an Iron Islander will RAPE/TORTURE you first. Can't really rehabilitate them for it is part of their religion. Just yuck. So cringe.

If the muggles ever discover Magical Britain, it should be a Weasley's fault. They can't shut up their gob. Their father thinks the Statute of Secrecy is just a suggestion. The type like Dumbles that think muggles are jolly good innocent beings. Some muggles maybe, but their governments? Please. Also, we can safely say this author(s) avatar(s) are Dapne and/or Delacour sisters. Or, that Harry will definitely have a harem on the other side. I like Chapter 1, I dislike the obvious "beautiful women and ugly men". Cringe. Atleast the men seem competent. Though why is Hagrid The Homicide Via Recklessness still alive?

its a good idea of a story but its boring. well written but there has been no action yntil chapter 16 well except for the melee but it was boring. sigh

I guess you lost your passion for this story. Shame that. I hope you update someday.

I'm so sad this story is dead

smart move on tracey's part. I completely understand her reasoning

Anymore chapters in ya?

More please, I very liked. Thanks.

20% of this chapter was a recap.

This is an outstanding story! Aside from a few spelling errors here and there, this truly captured my interest from the start, and I hope you return to finish it one day.

Honestly Harry could have taken the Greengrass name in the game of thrones the Barrowlands in the North there is a minor house Greengrass. Ironborn kidnap women from everywhere there could be a Greengrass captive taken as a saltwife.

Great job