Reviews for The Road to Hell |
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1 love m4gic chapter 2 . 11/21/2019 It bothers me way too mcuh that there was no talking about technology! I really hope they preserve that precious knowledge and not just use magic only! PLS! |
1 love m4gic chapter 1 . 11/21/2019 I really hope they take "muggle" knowledge with them because if htey do not, then they are stupid! Why forget knowledge? I REALLY HOPE THEY KEEP IT! |
miguelgiuliano.co chapter 20 . 11/20/2019 Espero con ansias por el próximo capitulo. Ya quiero ver si harás que algunas personas del sur visiten las islas del hierro y hablen de su aspecto. Supongo que Robert y Ned morirán en estos siguientes capítulos, pero sería bueno que antes que pase Robert asigne a Harry como mentor del príncipe y así controlarlo. |
clsmith293 chapter 22 . 11/17/2019 Love your story! It’s been a while but I hope to see both what happens when the domino falls and Harry secures his plans for the Tyrells and his influence over Westeros (or if he’s prevented from doing that) and the fireworks Tracy is so reluctant to miss. Though they may be the same thing. Thanks for sharing the wonderful story and hope rl is treating you well! |
Guest chapter 22 . 11/9/2019 The story was amazing as usual. But it has been a couple of months since the last update. Ultimately it is your story, and you are the one who decides whether to continue it or not. Though it would be a shame to see such a well written story, especially in a crossover which has very few stories in the first place, be abandoned. I hope you haven't lost your inspiration for this story. Eagerly waiting for the next update! Thank you! |
MarkiexD chapter 22 . 11/10/2019 Great story you’ve written so far! You’ve included the wizarding world really well in the lands of westeros one of the best crossovers so far i’ve read! Hope you’ll update soon and if not thank you a lot for the story so far! |
sivachandan007 chapter 22 . 11/1/2019 when is the next chapter coming? |
redemption007 chapter 21 . 10/25/2019 Please update |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/12/2019 if that stuff at the end is more enemies from the old world following them then i will stop reading this story ... it just makes things so incredibly repetitive ... what is the point of writing a story about another world if the enemys are the same, the reason for the fight is the same, the people fighting are the same and ONLY the location changed ... what an incredibly waste of a good story idea ... |
Katsuhito chapter 12 . 10/5/2019 So far this is a very interesting story. I have only one criticism: the "previously, on Road to Hell" section at the beginning of each chapter is somewhat irritating (to me, anyway). Firstly, if I am coming back to the story when a new chapter drops and hadn't read the previous material in a while, well I can just go back and read it if I want a recap. As it is, I have to skip over a page or so every chapter. Also, it inflates the story's word count unnecessarily. While that's a minor thing, some readers judge what stories they are willing to start at least partially by the word count, and having an inflated count might be seen as deceitful. That aside, I have to get back to reading now. :) Good story! |
narutoDkurosaki chapter 16 . 10/4/2019 Seriously a freaking OC character beat Dean Thomas one of the survivors of a freaking demon apocalypse? Like seriously so much potential but logic out of the window in this chapter. |
Ahmed Maged chapter 3 . 9/24/2019 So he couldnt read her mind? He is too soft to a women who killed children mother and father She desrve the most painful death |
AJ Granger chapter 10 . 9/20/2019 It was becoming kind of obvious with her being sick at odd times. |
AJ Granger chapter 4 . 9/19/2019 A good plan to make friends with the honorable Ned Stark. |
AJ Granger chapter 3 . 9/19/2019 Frankly, magicals replacing the Iron Islands and turning them into something usable sounds like a reasonable plan. I like the story so far and think you've done well with the characters. |