This fic is very creative but the way it tries to justify all of Harry’s actions is exhausting. The “villains” so to speak seem very one dimensional, to the point where you dehumanise them in order to justify Harry’s use of them as slave labour(ironborn) or target practice(free folk). It would be much better if the Order of the dragon wasn’t stripped to a doormat for Harry’s plans and they actually disagreed with him on things. Or you could make the villains more complex

Looking forward to the next one

So I'm guessing you "lost your passion" for this fanfiction... Real shame as it was a very fun read and I loved how you utilised less common characters from the HP Universe instead of the usually 'Golden Trio' etc.
The subtle manipulations and extraordinarily fast ascension of the house albion was a tad on the nose as it felt like you considered all the people of Westeros to be primitive idiots. Even the people considered to be very cunning and intelligent in the GoT books seem rather stupid compared to the magical lot which I thought was a bit unfair.
Anyway good story but disappointing you appear to have abandoned it

And so, it turned harem. What a pity, I greatly enjoyed the story

It's going so good so far! Please, please, please, let it not turn out to be a harem. Daphne is more than enough

Lame words. But I hope it doesn't matter much

why isnt hagrid using a wand yet?

im sure his magic would be hella potent cuz he got some giant blood in him

i hope harry still trains his wizards physically and magically cuz whether they battla mages or not they are all gonna fight someday

and bein complacent ain't gonna help

im sure the goblins arent gonna grow fat in peace

they gotta be like the mandolorians in getting havin the drive to be strong

what with that one guy sayin it aint right? the dothraki are basically thieving and raping bandits

they are somewhat above the cannibals but not by much

if harry dies to poison mundane or otherwise imma flip a table

cuz basilik venom is basically like a dark acid curse lol

it kinda worried me that he doesnt bleed out poison and sweat acid

wait couldnt dean aperate WITH hedwig?

whats happening bro

also whyd u change the communication mirrors? wasnt it the size of a smartphone or any kind of mirror?

and whyd clementine even know to get a portkey?

yeah it had magic but im sure dean had lots of those like an expanded bag or something

i think ya made dean a lil too stupid here bro cuz ya dont leave around an emergency portkey willy nilly

and why a coin? youd think apocalypses dean would make a necklace or ring portkey

cuz ya could lose or drop a coin in times of panic like with the dark magic zombie horde sprinting to get you but you wont lose whats already attached to you like your underwear or something

did the poison make him lose some braincells?

dang harry really needs to train his spies up more in evading tactics like transfiguring walls into steel spikes that could double as a wall or transfiguring the air into smoke

transfiguration is real op bro they gotta use it more cuz bombardas are kinda loud

now that i think about it it would be cool if the twins made a giant golem like westeros giant from the true north

make them use polearms and shields too

ohh and make the golems weapons spread sticky fire

cuz if their slow already ya might as well capitalize on that shit and make their every swing an area denial

the wizards could just use the flame freezing charm or a flame proof charm or whatever magic so their normal troops would be fine

also cant they make some horse golems?

and cant wizards transfigure and animate an army of rock or metal lions or elephants? atleast 10 or 15 of them?

if only harry and the gang made war with the slave cities lol they would have a lot of loyal subjects that now how to work hard in almost all fields

the golem thing make no sense bro runes are limitless bro

its the code of reality!

also they just need to make the runes hidden and not be in the open

cuz people always wanna fuck that shit up

why do you think mythical golems have their weak spots are inside?

like da hell bro ya should have the runes on the inside of your their armor to make it truly unbreakable unless they get electrocuted or burned, completely bypassing the armor unless its air tight

cant harry and the gang become real powerful merchants? cuz they come from modern times and could make some glass

glass alone would make the gang rich

and sell fruits and food

plus they could make salt and probably conjure up lots of sugar

and they could sell some muggle alcohol and other toiletries like shampoo

wonder if harry could make steam engine ships?

or transfigure his new navy ships into steel? and charm the sails to be unbreakable? cuz i mean who said transfiguration cant be permanent when harry got a physics book? aint transfiguration just molecular manipulation? maybe it changes back because that shit aint stable and is ony holding up cuz of the power of imagination and magic?

making the ships into steel could give them lots of ramming potential bro