Reviews for Jounetsu no Hanzai
Ariyah chapter 1 . 1/19/2017
Good work showing what led to Suzaku murdering his father, even to that little lesson after the alley incident.
Apart from some little things like spelling, my only complaint is that Lelouch was introduced at the beginning and didn't show up again till the end. I know he had nothing to do with Genbu's murder, but after his presence in the beginning, it felt odd that he wasn't present during the middle. Related to that is Nunnally's absence except for a little bit at the end. Where was she when Suzaku met Lelouch or when Lelouch promised to destroy Britannia?
Besides that, though, I enjoyed this glimpse into the mind of young Suzaku.