Reviews for The Winter King |
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![]() ![]() ![]() please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is utterly stupid, you just threw all that intelligence Harry had immediately out the window literally one chapter later, This is in a new world clearly surrounded by nothing but muggles medieval age muggles at that and he thinks it's a good idea to tell them that he's from another world? How does that make even the tiniest amount of sense? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Helluva opening chapter |
![]() ![]() Will you please finish this bloody story already seriously please f**king finish it |
![]() ![]() This is so unrealistic. |
![]() ![]() Holy shit this story is retarded |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man Harry is useless! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, just wanted to check if this story was abandoned since you still post other things |
![]() ![]() ![]() New readers saver your time and energy reading this straight garbage. Its canon rehash with harry as a side character. Massive time skips for no reason. Harry conveniently forgets he is a wizard for most of the story. Just don't. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again harry can dissaparate and yet he doesnt use it to save someone even though he’s not trying to hide it |
![]() ![]() ![]() He still has his wand and yet he doesn't use magic to save his "Father". He made an igloo with magic in the first chapter so you can't tell his magic doesn't work in Westeros. If your gonna add Harry Potter to games of thrones at least let him alter events instead of nerfing him just because you want the story to stay the same except with the bonus of calling it a "crossover" . |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story. I remember when this was being written. It was awesome. I had to wait a couple years for the last update, and unfortunately, it still hasn't been updated since. Damn good story. Just got done binging it again. Ahhh, the frustration still gets me! Still cannot believe that you left it like that. I wanted to see the counteroffensive so bad. Gah. I really hope you come back to thks someday. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Every time i read a fanfic where Harry goes to this world i hope the author won’t have harry go blabbing who he is and where he is from. And almost every time i am disappointed. Like seriously THIS version of Harry MORE than any other shouldn’t be telling anyone about his situation. Like the whole first chapter was about how he learned to “act” like what was expected in order to fit in from a young age. But here he is immediately breaking that idea and going “oh yeah i totally don’t know the name of the place where i am even if it seems like it might be important. Oh yeah and I don’t even know thr name of the continent i am on!” Instead of being smart the author makes this harry act like a moron. He could easily have said he was lost in a blizzard and asked for a map and got his bearings from there. Instead he just opens his gob like a moron. There was ZERO need to tell ANYONE his life story and no Harry who was as untrusting as this one would EVER do so. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is stupid. How can they have sansa inside winterfell if he is guarding it outside for 2 years? |
![]() ![]() ![]() There is an error in chapter 1. He sees the resurrection stone ring in his right finger. Then in another sentence it says that he feels it in his pocket |