Reviews for The Murdered Do Haunt Their Murderers |
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JabberjayHeart chapter 14 . 1/3/2020 damn socks, doing the good work and keeping this going all these years making me look bad |
nevergone4ever chapter 12 . 10/17/2019 IM. SCREAMING. I ALWAYS LOSE TRACK OF THIS STORY AND FIND IT AGAIN. AND NOW IVE FOUND IT AND CANT STOP READING AND HOLY SHIT I AM SO FUCKING EXCITED TO READ MORE. IF YOU NEED A SIGN TO CONTINUE THIS STORY, THIS IS IT. YOU ARE IN THE THICK OF IT AND GOOD HEAVENS IS IT GOING WELL. |
li'l fat necrosis chapter 14 . 12/26/2018 i love you too |
sophia aka ng4ev chapter 2 . 12/20/2018 i forgot about this story entirely but i was stalking profiles because im lowkey thinking of making a comeback and i saw you had a story and im like huh fun she updated two months ago and i look and its THIS. i am so excited to read. i hope i followed this story the last time i logged in in like 2017 so i get updates. KEEP DOIN U BABE |
Alice Kingsleighs chapter 14 . 10/29/2018 BITCH I S2G I SCREAMED A LIL AT UNI WHEN I SAW THIS LIKE GIRL MY LIFE IS COMPLETE NOW THANK U JESUS THANK U NOW I CAN DIE IN PEACE wait no, that'd be when the story's finally complete anywAY, ignoring the long ass hiatus and everything i actually had to read the previous chapter to engage with this one literally u dont even know how much i've missed this LMfao now these spoiled ass kids are in on the kill! the alliances are crazy and random and im like? i live for this dane anyway this bitch doesn't deserve doran and jeremiah, like honestly id rther see him dead b4 doran LMFAO, 10 mins into the games and chill and everyone's already fighting, im surprised no one actually started killing anyone? ok that's impressive honestly gab just floating away from the mess #iconic jeremiah better find freya and they better escape via a gate to unicorn land and live happily ever after thank u mariana, bitch u r boring audrex kills me, like bitch U SHOULD HAVE GRABBED HER HANDS AND LIKE TOOK OVER OR SMTH they better team up again and makeout or smth k, love my babies also audrey: go fuck yourselves #iconic madison doesn't deserve any of this jackson pls die blake, he better be kicking ass with brandon but honestly im not getting good vibes from this like bitch ber careful ohmygod chanel's plan is literally genius how could have no one thought about this (sarcasm) honestly i feel like baptiste is prolly facepalming so hard rn also a fucking revolver? who the fuck did she bribe seraphina doesn't deserve this as well and im curious why the fuck chanel picker her lmao anyway update soon u hoe |
TheAmazingJAJ chapter 14 . 10/28/2018 I thought this was abandoned. I was very happily wrong! The teens are finally into the woods and learning how to survive, and I feel like a lot of the povs hint at growing tensions... although the next chapter could lead to our first death in the woods :O Oooh, Chanel with her gun will make a power combo ;) Good luck with the next chapter! Rowing must have been crazy tbh glad you survived XDD I'll be waiting for the next chapter patiently! |
TheAmazingJAJ chapter 1 . 7/24/2018 This looks so cool! I'm very very very very interested! I'm the lone straggler who came intro the SYOT community last year XD Looking forward to reading this story! |
Alice Kingsleighs chapter 13 . 11/10/2017 im fucking hollering im out of WORDS bitch im gonna get back on this when I GATHER MY FUCKING SHIT BC U JUST DETROYED MY ASS BYE GOOD FUCKING bYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYE |
twistedservice chapter 13 . 11/1/2017 omg i've been lowkey keeping up with this story for too long now and dang this was like, even better than i expected? and i don't really know what else to say because i'm with articulating myself but ! seriously so good, my dude. i like that you changed shane to 30th for your aforementioned reasons, definitely think it flowed better that way. and it made me care when ... let's be real, i definitely don't care about them all. anyway, yay! how do you end reviews? an 11/10 set of two chapters, honestly. |
Alphabetta chapter 4 . 11/1/2017 Can you believe I remembered this story just yesterday and came to reread some bits? Odd isnt it? I have to keep commenting though, I've missed a few... Been struggling about my interest for this fandom, but it's still there, even if it faded. One can't say no to the senseless murdering of kids. I'll be back. |
li'l fat necrosis chapter 13 . 10/31/2017 "Mr. Curran's… premature… execution" HOE |
Too Old For This Shtick chapter 10 . 8/26/2017 Ack, I'm super behind, sorry. Haven't been on this site in a while. But oh man, was it good to read this again. I say it with every review, and I'll say it again: your writing is fantastic. Specifically, your dialogue, and just how your characters interact with each other. Jeez, they're all such bitchy, petty teenagers, it's fantastic. Every conversation is pure gold. I love that there's this darker side slowly creeping out though, like the stuff that happened to Shane, Yuto's weird findings, and Sawyer wanting to talk to Alex. The teen drama atmosphere has been hilarious and awesome, but the slow transition you're doing into the more serious stuff is subtle and awesome. I almost forgot the Games were going to be a thing, but now I'm super interested in seeing how these kids handle them. Like, they all seem to want to kill each other, and yet I don't think any of them would actually jump to it when push came to shove. Not at first, at least, but I'm sure the counselors have something up their sleeves. Anyways, super stoked for the next chapter, and even more excited for the Games. If this is how well you write... I don't know, the "intro" or setup, I guess, then I can't wait to see your action and intense dramatic scenes. It's going to be awesome. |
Alice Kingsleighs chapter 10 . 8/25/2017 Bitch im fucking hollering u know update happy z I literally had to go all Simone on u to post gshjahaggahah as machiavelli said the end justifies the means And NOW I HAVE THE MF UPDATE YAS literally the level of this drama had me Shook bitch like honestly i was like that pic of jim from the office being shook hold lemme see if i can find it Nvm ill send it to u on tumblr smh. My point is. This chapter by far was the most extra. So intense and since we're on the verge of the games (i still believe that its all a joke and they're all going home safe and sound) its understandable how people are acting the way they are. Three days and hoes are already on each other's throats like. Holy shit. Now LETS ROAST THE KIDS B4 THEY GET ROASTED. 4REAL alexander fucking grim, aka emo queen, sweet baby who constantly fucks up just by breathing. Ok WHY IS HE SULKING 24/7 i wanna complain but those benefactors assholes robbed him of his meds and now...wow Alex really is Dark. Corey was right...for once gshhsha (no tea no shade). But yeah I really cant wait to see him snap. Go all ragey murder kitten on everyone except audrey bc shes his bae and queen. Anyways i laughed so hard at the part where Audrey looked ethereal to him. Like bitch where? Girl has the grace of a sloth Hsbhsjsnsnak. Bro here is head over heels I just love the fact that Alex has been nagging her for explanation the entire time and then when she does hes like ? BYE NOPE. NO I REFUSE TO BELIEVE THIS IM GONNA RUN AWAY INSTEAD. its the logical solution. There. Solved! Hzjajajakjsh sawyer is there to fix him Up alright I hate that man jesus. Whtever hes going to give mY kid I JUST KNOW ITS NOT GOOD FUCK U LEAVE HIM ALONE U CREEP LORD Dane, hes officially dropped off my chart of characters that i can tolerate, WHY IS HE SUCH AN ABUSIVE ASSHOLE? DORAN DID NOTHING WRONG. honestly Dane is being so mean to him, HIS FUCKING FRIEND, really hes just hot garbage. Screw him tbh. I mean I get it Doran can be a little extra and with everything going on and the tense atmosphere can Make u fucking Snap but Dane has been a shitty asshole to Doran for a long time and this is just the top of the cake. Like bruh Chill. Anyways Blake is REalizing things. This whole chapter is abt realizing things Next up is abt them DEALING WIT THINGZ. Mariana stfu hoe We all know that yall aint here for fun and shit. Im just surprised Blake was the one to figure this out and Not Dane. Proves that Academia is bullshit. Gshjaja Seraphina, sweet bb seraphina IMHAVING FEELZ OK. SERAFEELZ. ok honestly gwenaphina is such a pure ship id ship the fuck outta it if i wasnt already deep in gwen x yuto x brandon mess. But ok they can all have foursome? Nbd. Theze kids are extra as fuck id expect everything from them bye. Sera is too pure for that tho gahajahja. THE PART WHERE SHE TEARED UP AND GWEN HELD HER OK ? IM FUCKING? CRYING? BITCH LET SERA GO HOME SHE AND JEM AND FREYA. DID NOTHING WRONG . chanel is so shady BITCH WHATS THE TRUTH. LMFAOOOOO wes can suck my nonexistent dick Eimer, I LOVE HER OK? She's so sweet and considerate and honestly Not at all waht I expected her to turn out from the blog, its a pleasant surprise tbh. Its really sad that she had to hang out with simone/alaina and wjat not bc they clearly were bad influences on her, I just wished she'd had real friendships during her time in Haversmith, maybe shed even flourish AGGHH IM HAVING FEELZ HELP. that bit with jem/freya/sera was cute and it cleared my skin and watered my crops and ended my depression. BUT OFC BRANDON HAD TO RUIN IT WITH HIS GAMES UHHHHHHHHH WHYD U DO THAT BISH U WONT GET LAID NOW 1000% SURE. POOR EIMER Madison. MY SHADY ASS BISH. MONICA WHOM? THIS GIRL IS SHADY AF AND I LOVE HER. she and aud are so similar they just cant deal with the drama lmfao. OMG SHE HAS DIRT ON EVERYONE WITHOUT TRYING #GOALS. lmfao ok but like Trina has a thing for brandon? BiTCH BYE. UNIBROW BITCH WAS SUCH AN ICONIC LINE LMFAOOOOOOO I MENTALLY HIGH FIVED CHANEL FOR THIS. WES IS BANGING ALAINA. ALAINA HAS A BOYF. BUT SHEZ A LESBIAN BRANDON THREATENS i cant believe im saying this but i feel bad for her gBNBhsba she never asked for any of this. The fight was so fucking epic? Lmfao? MILO enjoying his sweet time like #relatable. Mads roommmates then have a round table and discuss the fight like some political debate? Bye. Iconic scene 10/10 lmfao Whens u bitch revealing the benefactors? Milo better be audrey's or ill turn quincy on u tbh fack Also NEXT CHAP IS GONNA BE UP SOON BSNSJAMMAMANA ALL THE HOT TEA IS GONNA BE #SPILLEDTTTTTT IM HERE WAITING WITH OPEN ARMS. GIVE ME THE DRAMA YAS |
Alice Kingsleighs chapter 9 . 8/6/2017 Hi im back im sorry but it was too late yesterday and my mind shut down tbh SO LIKE ANYWAYS THIS CHAP IS THE MVP? like bitcg all this fucking drama that happened...GOD. I gotta say thanks to simone (who woulda thought) for STARTING drama PULL THE TRIGGER SIMONE Shane: MY BAE. I KNEW IT WAS HIM WHO GOT HIS ASS BEAT BUT LIKE I WASNT SURE AND MY MIND STARTED MAKING SUM CRAZY ASS THEORIES ABT ANABEL BEING THE ONE KILLED BY THE BENEFACTORS BC SHE BETRAYED THEM OR SMTH? THis is what u get when u watch too many HBO shows...anyway IM SCREAMING HIS BEAUTIFUL FACE WAS RUINED UGHH fuck those assholes... Literally all these motherfucking heathens should just team up against the benefactors and burn them or smth? Like it works. Btw aaawwwww monica being caring like thats sweet. SHANICA IS GOOD AND I SHIP IT Chanel. I'm literally screaming. This bitch has cussed in this chap more than all them hoes combined in 9 chaps GURL HAS NO FILTER. NOPE NOT AT ALL. i love chan tbh. Her personality isnt borderline psycho bitch and she's not nice but at least she has some fucking decency. I cant believe Simone dissed her. Bitch what up. ALSO THE GIANNA DRAMA . I'm glad chan stood up to her sis yes go ahead girl Trina Just do your eyebrows and stop bullying ppl FFS. skank ass bitch Simone if it isnt one of the fake slut trio (alaina, trina). I can't believe she thinks she has tea to spill. Like bring smth new to the table or shut up. I feel she just wants to feel valuable but thats just making her even more cringey. THAT AUDREX FIGHT SCENE HAS CLEAREDMY SKIN WATERED MY CROPS AND CURED MY DEPRESSION ALEX STOP BEING A DRAMA QUEEN AUDREY JUST TELL HIM WHAT HAPPENED U FUCKING BITCH SIMONE STOP INTERFERRING BETWEEN MARRIED COUPLES 100$ says shes gonna spread nasty rumors abt them smh. Like alex killing audrey's parents or smth (aud would be happy tbh?) Blake, I HONESTLY LOVE BLAKE NOW? so like ive already told u how i thought BoTH shane and him being drugged and all that shiz. Turnz out HE JUST LWGIT PASSED OUT LMAO?! what A dude. I can relate. Anyways I loved HIS INTERACTION WITH SHANE? good bros. I just feel bad bc blake thinks its all his fault even after shane clarified shit up. I just hope they get some sort of conclusion b4 YA KNO Audrey, this bitch i s2g. If the FBI come taking her shell be likw. Imma sleep first hol up. Anyway fuck audrex (no just kidding) i now hereby ship Audriah. Their interaction was so sweet my ass cant take this wtf. FOR ONCE IN HER LIFE SHE FUCKING ACTUALLY HELPED? LORD JESUS I THINK IVE SEEN GOD. anyways audriah can team up and kick ass bc hella. That comment with sawyer should win an Emmy. Like thats my sassy sleepy bitch! I raised her right They JUST DIDNT? OMG when i thought these bitches Cant get any worse. Those benefactors r fuckibg certified demons. Like what the fuck ever? Anyways im just fucking emotional and i want another update but im a greedy slut pls take ur time but also hurry up and conyinue this no shade at corey or anything |
Alice Kingsleighs chapter 8 . 8/5/2017 YAS BITCH IM BACK! AND IMMA FUCKING REVIEW this story is literally my life now. LISTEN IM ATTACHED TO THESE KUDS LIKE U HAVE NO IDEA CAN THEY ALL SURVIVE (except simone and alaina tbh) i mean REALLY ITS GONNA SUCK WHEN THEY START DYING IM NOT READY fantastic chap as usual MY BITCH ALI KNOWS HOW TO WRITE OKK I LOVED HOW OMINOUS THE ATMOSPHERE WAS AT THE ENDING LIKE BITCH...this inspires me to write an horror spin-off that im literally not gonna write lmao im just a sad hoe with so many ideas and no desire to write AnYWAYS OFF TO THE KIDS Gabrielle, ok in all honesty she's...not as troublesome back home as she's at school. BITCH CALLING AUD A PUSSY WHEN SHE NEVER FUCKING BREAKS HOME CURFEW OK? So I knew this bitch had sum family issues tbh Her entire personality screams MY PARENTS SUCK ASS NOTICE ME YALL Or maybe she's just projecting bc her brother went to jail and whatnot "im never becoming like jasper" hell yea bitch bc You will be fucking dead *yawns* yall kids exhause me with the drama yet it wahts keeping Me living Mariana, My least fave bitch. I HATE TO SAY THIS. BUT LIKE SHE WAS BEARABLE THIS CHAPTER?! she was just being helpful and shit and i appreciate her move with Griffin. NO MILO ROASTING THIS TIME WHYYYY. i was waiting for him to drop some Truth bombs on her. Oh well next time. She KISSED GRIFFIN like no wonder the dude got all worked up. Kissing her must be hell. Of course she is in the Drama Club LIKE WHY WOULD I EXPECT ANY LESS LMAOOO? GWEN, im still a hardcore chebisu shipper but where's my brandon/gwen/yuto threesome tbh. Omg the drama is starting between yuto and gwen. I mean honestly im yu's team bc (a im fucking biased lmao b) Why would he exaggerate something as dumb as this? Gwen listening to yuto singing about tearing pussiez like nobody's business. NEED ME A FREAK LIKE THAT. madison is so shady. She knows. Just knows shit and OMGFFFFFFF SIMONE OVERHEARD. CONGRATS SLUTS NOW EVERYONE IS GONNA FUCKING KNOW. i cant wait for chebisu to reconcile with lots of making out as the world crashes behind them. I Cant unsee this shit now. Bye! Brandon. My FAV FUCKBOY. LISTEN. I STILL LOVE THIS BITCH. BUT HE SHOULD PULL HIS HEAD OUT OF THE GUTTER AND JUST JOIN GWEN AND YUTO IN A LOVING HEALTHY POLY RELATIONSHIP. STOP CHASING BIG BOOBS E U FUGGING SLUT ANYWays not gonna fucking lie but i wanted them to bang. Maybe i. Just desperate for drama as much as Simone. But yeah. Brandon is gonna blackmail that hoe alaina and its gonna be awesome. I cant believe SOMEONE FINALLY is going to bring down that bitch. About Damn time. Only brandon can make me proud smh Gerard MY BOOKWARM LIL FLUFFY BABY. I STILL LOVE GERARD. he's just the sweetest Awwwww him caring about Blake and his well being. We dont deserve Gerard tbh. Also brandon...asking ppl to smell your sweaty armpits Isnt how to get to them to bed. I cant believe im teaching this noob how to flirt smh. OMFG SO THE TITLE IS FROM WUTHERING HEIGHTS? GURL LISTEN. i didnt read it but it was a sick Move. Nicely done. I love how the atmosphere immediately changed from calm to brooding. Shane's cry literally made me shdder. I cant believe these bitches basically slept through it. No wonder the benefactors succeeded in making them kill each other. These hoes dont just give a damn ANYWAYS FLAWLESS WRITING SORRY FOR THE BAD REVIEW IM JUST EXCITED TBH |