Reviews for Edward Takes a Holiday
Shazzeer chapter 16 . 1/20
I wish there was a future take. Just to know if maybe they had kids. And what about Alice and Jasper? Did they become vampires maybe even parents? And what about Rosalie and Emmet? Also how is the family dynamic with all off them
? Between Carlisle, Esme, Bella, Edward, Emmet, Rosalie, Alice and Jasper?
Shazzeer chapter 7 . 1/20
I have a hard time seeing a rude Carlisle. Even if he is a incubus… but he came back for Esme and Edward *swoon*
Shazzeer chapter 5 . 1/20
*gasp* Omg what, Vampire what?! Is Edwards father a vampire? His mother? Did Edwards mother now if his dad was one? Is Emmet and Rosalie vamps to? Is that why he has a desire to kill? Does Bella smell delicious to him?
Flora Mile chapter 16 . 11/20/2021
Love this story, blast from beginning to end!

Would love to see a future take and catch up with these two!
MissWM chapter 16 . 10/29/2021
This was insane! And completely amazing. I don't even have words. I had a blast. Thanks for sharing
whatokimdoneby chapter 2 . 5/7/2021
. yes i realise how stupid i was and i am very sorry, and yes i enjoyed the book i wasnt expceting edward to be a vampire and i loved how you chose a different type of vampire to the one Myer used. it really made it different and i loved it.
whatokimdoneby chapter 2 . 5/6/2021
Hi sorry it is me again on the last chapter in my apology message i put ot was my intention to come across as unkind and i actually ment it wasnt my intention, i just forgot to add the last to letters
whatokimdoneby chapter 1 . 5/6/2021
i am very sorry it was my intention to come off as ukind, i did not mean to offend you in anyway, it was just the name 'banner' which was from the Marvel Cinemetic Universe and i am sorry i assosciated it with your book. i hope you can forgive me because you are a truly amazing writer and i really enjoyed the book.
whatokimdoneby chapter 1 . 4/30/2021
ohh loooool, banner is basically the hulk but anywayi love the book tho it is reallyy good xxx
whatokimdoneby chapter 7 . 4/29/2021
loool BANNER MARVEL FANDOMMM
Gemm13 chapter 6 . 7/6/2020
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Guest chapter 9 . 5/8/2020
I’m still confused as to why he just had to up and leave in the middle of the night without saying anything to Bella. Sure he was “embracing his change” but I’m sure he could have put it off an hour or so just to tell Bella he was leaving. Makes no sense.
Guest chapter 16 . 1/25/2020
I absolutely love it. I do hope you write more of their stories. Regards Toni

Australia.
abbyweyr chapter 16 . 1/13/2020
Interesting and different. Glad Alice and Jasper survived, wondered if it was a test of some kind.
diamondnightskies chapter 16 . 12/21/2019
This was so good! I kind of want to read it again immediately! I absolutely loved all the little memory flashbacks of their time together as teenagers. I thought Jasper and Alice were hysterical, and for a while I thought maybe they all had it wrong and Alice would be the hitman...hitwoman?...using him as a bumbling front or something. But it's even funnier that he's actually that sloppy. I adore the dynamic between Bella and Edward, and both of their personalities. His determination and confidence in his success at winning her back, even though she kept forcing him to reevaluate just how angry she really was. So much about this just made me laugh and smile. And I wanna say, I know other commenters can't seem to fathom not having been with anyone else in all their time apart, but I don't find that strange at all. Not everyone enjoys casual flings and if you still have deep, love of your life type feelings for someone else then it's understandable that no one else would appeal. Not to mention fir Edward he has numerous reasons to not want to be involved with anyone and for Bella she may have been left with insecurities and trust issues, plus works in a bar where I'm sure she sees a ton of less than fulfilling hook-ups go down.
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