AHHH I LOVE IT! Honestly compared to your other fics (that I’ve read), this one is a bit different and refreshing. I didn’t expect the story and Edward’s thoughts to be so hilarious to read hahah he’s naturally a comedian, which is a pleasant surprise since most vampireWard fics I’ve read described him as a gloomy, brooding guy. this Bella was also such a badass that I can’t help but falling in love with her as well (I get Alice now.) thanks for writing this fun story! inserts teary eyed and love emoji here

SO MUCH HAPPENED IN THIS CHAPTER! first of all, that was HOT. second, Edward is sooo fucking funny with his nicknames for Jasper. he’s very creative in that department lol. and that ending.. ah.. I knew Jasper wouldn’t be that stupid (being Edward’s rival as a hitman and all), like he must’ve picked up something was off with Edward. I’m actually suspecting he’s also a vampire like him… hm. let’s see! I intend to finish this fic in a few hours

O MY GOD! I was not expecting the twist at the end

(don’t mind me I’m just starting to read all your other fics while waiting for the Water Bowl List updateI find that I really, really like your writing style) ah I wasn’t expecting them to be childhood sweethearts! I love how Bella didn’t give in so easily haha Edward might need to try harderr

Literally sobbing that I have to say bye to these two now. Legit so sad this was only 16 chapters. I took a break so I wouldnt have to finish it so fast lol I’m so attached. Hands down one of my fave Bella and Edwards EVER. They’re so down for each other. Like he explained to her and yeah she played hard to get a bit but homegirl was sooo in. Like when she walked into the standoff and disarmed jizzjerk no questions asked even though Edward also had a gun lol or when she instantly disliked Rose just like Edward. The way she didn’t bat an eye at his job and was just like okay, so we’re relocating him to Florida lol Soulmates me thinks! Ugh. I need that. That all encompassing love. The devoted, lovestruck, stars in his eyes boyfriend with Bella’s sense of humor and kick ass personality lmao (but of course this could only exist here in ffland lol). Bella too had stars in her eyes for him and I thought that was just so cute. The snacks he recreated for her when she was injured and again in Frankie was when her starry eyes came out. Her “I haven’t forgiven you yet” and his “what can I do?” And then the staring into eachothers eyes. Had me kicking my feet they were so adorable.

Oh! One of my favorite parts that shows this was when Edward was at the beach with Alice and Jasper and Alice was telling him how in sync he and bella were with each other and Edward was fighting to keep the stars out his eyes about it lmao another fave part was when he squealed at the thought of getting a text back from Bella LMFAO they’re so cute. Also, the part where she said they could either move on or try to pick up the pieces but he was like I’ll pick up every last piece. Dude, the way I had to smother myself with my pillow. He’s so smooth lol they deserve everything good in the world.

Apart from the certain urges he has due to his affliction and his occupation (lolol) this story was SO WHOLESOME. I loved their history and the flashbacks and them recreating some of them. I fell in love with their love. I loved your spin on the vampire thing. So new (to me at least) and fun! I’ve never read a story with this take on it. I loved it!

About Jizzjerk…NO WAY LMAO he really was just what Edward said he was! Okay, so they totally were in vacation mode and not scoping everyone out on the low but at least I wasn’t so wrong about our possible lesbian lolol it is somewhat of a tag team and she’s totally the brains in that relationship. I can’t believe I was wrong about jizzjerk. Maybe I’ve watched John Wick too many times and convinced myself that hitmen have to be as meticulous as him and our Edward here to be successful. He’s just been lucky in his jobs and lucky to have his wife in the know lol

I’ve been sad before when letting your other characters and story go once I’ve completed them but this one is really hard! I loved everything about them. I’m comforting myself with knowing that after I read a bunch of other stories I’ll come back to yours to reread and relive again! Thank you so much for your words, your imagination and your humor! On to the next!

Um, MAJOR SWOON. What a chapter. I love that they’re reconnecting!

Jasper is most definitely working and I feel like he might purposely be acting as an amateur to throw Edward off. Is Bella the target? I’m wondering what could have happened in her life to possibly make her a target if that’s truly whats happening. Also, the way Alice looked at Bella makes me think she’s involved like maybe they’re a tag team? Maybe she’s not truly in this lust haze/intense vacation mode as she plays to be. OR OR OR the target is Edward. Like there’s a hit on both Jasper and Edward. It makes sense! What are the chances they get the exact room one floor apart? But hm, they were already at Bella’s bar when Edward showed up. So maybe Bella is the target. Either way they HAVE to be on a job. They just always seem to be around

These two are so fun to read! Edward’s inner monologue and Bella’s penchant for throwing the nearest objects/instant violence is cracking me up lmao Already one of my favorite edward and bellas that you’ve written. I can’t wait to get the backstory on them

This is my second read of this story. Still love it!

Thanks for sharing ! I had a blast ! It was smart, funny, sweet and with lots of suspense and twists. I loved it !

I just found this and read it straight through. Brilliant! Absolutely loved it. Such a unique and fun twist on the vampires. Such a good story! Love your work.

Huh…. It sounds like jasper may be clueless, he doesn’t know who Edward is.

Awesome story! Thanks for sharing.

Awesome!

I can’t help thinking that Jazz is smarter than he is letting on,
Alice might be his accomplice. Bella could be his mark and there
could be cameras in her house.

Is the Jazzman human?
I have to wonder if he is smarter than Edward thinks.
He might be there for Edward or maybe Bella.