|Reviews for Edward Takes a Holiday|
| Cesium Spring chapter 16 . 8/15
Thanks for sharing ! I had a blast ! It was smart, funny, sweet and with lots of suspense and twists. I loved it !
| BurchGirl chapter 16 . 7/31
I just found this and read it straight through. Brilliant! Absolutely loved it. Such a unique and fun twist on the vampires. Such a good story! Love your work.
| VryUnique chapter 14 . 7/27
Huh…. It sounds like jasper may be clueless, he doesn’t know who Edward is.
| VryUnique chapter 16 . 7/27
Awesome story! Thanks for sharing.
| VryUnique chapter 15 . 7/27
| VryUnique chapter 9 . 7/27
I can’t help thinking that Jazz is smarter than he is letting on,
Alice might be his accomplice. Bella could be his mark and there
could be cameras in her house.
| VryUnique chapter 8 . 7/27
Is the Jazzman human?
I have to wonder if he is smarter than Edward thinks.
He might be there for Edward or maybe Bella.
| VryUnique chapter 7 . 7/27
Edward is making some progress.
I am wondering if hit Emmett sent
is going to be for Bella.
| VryUnique chapter 6 . 7/27
She’s gonna think he’s crazy.
I wonder if she has been with anyone else.
I wonder what her reaction would be if Edward
said he would leave her alone.
| VryUnique chapter 5 . 7/27
Huh….. I didn’t see that coming. Now that would be a plausible excuse but
how is he able to be in the sun and drink? I can’t recall if he has eaten
| VryUnique chapter 4 . 7/27
I can’t think of anything Edward would say that would excuse him disappearing
without a word. Being a hit man and not being good for her isn’t good enough.
| VryUnique chapter 3 . 7/27
Bella was rightly pissed but he noticed all the signs that he still affects her.
Knowing that, he should have just said ok and left and than waited for her
to come to him. Lounging around the pool by the bar flirting should have
done the trick.
| VryUnique chapter 2 . 7/27
I’m going to assume they are about 30 or a bit above if Edward was climbing
in her window before he left.
| midnitereader chapter 16 . 7/18
I loved this. All the funny moments. Seeing Edward and Bella reconnect. Wonder where Bella learned her mad defense skills disarming Jassper like that. Jasper has a lot to learn and Edward, if he really wants to, has a lot to teach him. Can't believe Jasper is a skilled hitman. He has nothing on Edward. But the love and acceptance and forgiveness Bella has for Edward is truly beautiful.
| edtwilightlla chapter 16 . 3/20
AAHH! loved this Edward and Bella. It was refreshing. Would love to read a future take...