|Reviews for Edward Takes a Holiday|
| 90sVibes chapter 2 . 5/7
. yes i realise how stupid i was and i am very sorry, and yes i enjoyed the book i wasnt expceting edward to be a vampire and i loved how you chose a different type of vampire to the one Myer used. it really made it different and i loved it.
| 90sVibes chapter 2 . 5/6
Hi sorry it is me again on the last chapter in my apology message i put ot was my intention to come across as unkind and i actually ment it wasnt my intention, i just forgot to add the last to letters
| 90sVibes chapter 1 . 5/6
i am very sorry it was my intention to come off as ukind, i did not mean to offend you in anyway, it was just the name 'banner' which was from the Marvel Cinemetic Universe and i am sorry i assosciated it with your book. i hope you can forgive me because you are a truly amazing writer and i really enjoyed the book.
| 90sVibes chapter 1 . 4/30
ohh loooool, banner is basically the hulk but anywayi love the book tho it is reallyy good xxx
| 90sVibes chapter 7 . 4/29
loool BANNER MARVEL FANDOMMM
| Gemm13 chapter 6 . 7/6/2020
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/8/2020
I’m still confused as to why he just had to up and leave in the middle of the night without saying anything to Bella. Sure he was “embracing his change” but I’m sure he could have put it off an hour or so just to tell Bella he was leaving. Makes no sense.
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/25/2020
I absolutely love it. I do hope you write more of their stories. Regards Toni
| abbyweyr chapter 16 . 1/13/2020
Interesting and different. Glad Alice and Jasper survived, wondered if it was a test of some kind.
| diamondnightskies chapter 16 . 12/21/2019
This was so good! I kind of want to read it again immediately! I absolutely loved all the little memory flashbacks of their time together as teenagers. I thought Jasper and Alice were hysterical, and for a while I thought maybe they all had it wrong and Alice would be the hitman...hitwoman?...using him as a bumbling front or something. But it's even funnier that he's actually that sloppy. I adore the dynamic between Bella and Edward, and both of their personalities. His determination and confidence in his success at winning her back, even though she kept forcing him to reevaluate just how angry she really was. So much about this just made me laugh and smile. And I wanna say, I know other commenters can't seem to fathom not having been with anyone else in all their time apart, but I don't find that strange at all. Not everyone enjoys casual flings and if you still have deep, love of your life type feelings for someone else then it's understandable that no one else would appeal. Not to mention fir Edward he has numerous reasons to not want to be involved with anyone and for Bella she may have been left with insecurities and trust issues, plus works in a bar where I'm sure she sees a ton of less than fulfilling hook-ups go down.
| greeneyes84 chapter 5 . 11/28/2019
Holy shit was not expecting that part!
| Guest chapter 16 . 9/24/2019
Well written - thanks for sharing.
| fla.polo chapter 16 . 8/28/2019
Girlllll! My, oh my! Loved it alllllll! Read it On a row! Haven’ Stopped Reading! I’m almost ashamed of reviewing in some poor lines cause I sure loved everything about this story! This Edward, this Bella, their story, the human/vampire setting, Key West! And the feelings and emotions and words and laughs and sex! Woowwwww!
Thank you! And be sure to know that I will be waiting for your mad/great/crazy stories! Beijos!
| twidorkxx16 chapter 8 . 7/30/2019
This Edward is OBNOXIOUS but I love it
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/26/2019
I loved Edward the bad guy, a little different from Stefanie version. I don't like the idea of waiting thirteen years for someone but I think in this case was worthy.
Thanks for your time