Reviews for Death is but the Next Great Adventure |
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![]() ![]() ![]() damn had no idea this wasnt finished with how well it was written now what will i read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Imagine taking out life insurance so you can threaten your best friends boyfriend to treat him right without worry |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just discovered this. Absolutely loved this and was really getting into it. I know it has been some years but really hope this is continuing |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter is like an AUHarry was just on summer break before thiswhen was Geoffrey supposed to have happened? And why would he be so traumatized out of the blue? It's totally OOC for someone so close to Death, as well. Hate itmaybe because I love the story so much, feels like I have whiplash. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovely as always, i reread this and its great |
![]() ![]() What did it turn into was it like a song or something? |
![]() ![]() ![]() As part of my annual "read my favorite fanfics," I came to visit. I still love your story. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() This started off strong but got more frustrating and off-direction that the tone and these started out with. Ignoring the various plot holes and glazed over legal/ magical inadequacies, thank you for an enjoyable first 200k words |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story overall, but how you handled Riddle was a bit weak. Even if he's no longer the power-hungry Voldemort he would still be the ambitious man he is. And Harry's relationship with death just kind of dies out and is used for plot convincing. Don't get me wrong I do love this story and the overall plot, it just needs a bit of rework. |
![]() ![]() ![]() how stupid can this story get? Harry knows that the dam. journal is a horcrux and he still insists on bringing it with him all the time? The fuck is wrong with the author? plot convenience, I say. Dropping this shit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I personally think that your story is one of the most beautifully crafted pieces of fanfiction that I have had the pleasure to read. It is by far my favorite one in the Harry Potter fandom, and deserves to be immortalized online, and in the minds of the readers. A wonderful job author! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg, great story. absolutely loove it. please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm as confused as Harry... what's going on now? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a beautiful story. Thanks for sharing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know it been a long time since you update, but I hop you decided to come back to this. It is a well written story with a gradual plot that keeps the reader coming back without boring them by sticking to one aspect. |