everything else seems good though, I just can't stand this character flaw, it contradicts everything you built harry on

In this story Harry is a little bitch through and through. Not once did he actually stand up for himself, people actually killed him and he just threatened them. What is the use of all that power if he just sits there and take abuse, it is way too frustrating. He calls himself the "game master" but he didn't actually bring balance he just brought tom back and sit uselessly as people took turns shitting on him. I am not saying he has to kill everyone that looks at him wrong, but he does NOTHING as people constantly make attempts on his life. Is he a masochist? like wtf

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

You will rue the day you became my first nemesis...by having the most luscious thighs!

Ha! He's yandere!

Love, love, love this. Great work.

I was SO excited to see that this fic was getting updates again! This is the third (fourth?) time I've read through it. I didn't expect it to take the turn that it did, but I'm loving it!

So, so good.

Whoohoo someone for Anthony! I love this story!

boy really said thighs I mean wow

Anthony may be a little crazy.

Please tell me that that was a bts comment slipped in because if so it was perfect , loving the story is great

So crafty and creativity written. Can tell you had fun writing it as I enjoyed reading it. Thanks!

Hahah oh haha Anthony Oh this will be fun

Lol poor Anthony
Love as always

this is amazing

Truly brilliant writing here honey! Cannot wait to read more! ;o)