Interesting story. You should continue it...

Hope that Jon becomes king and is paired with Myrcella.

i really really wanted ned to bring up the fact that they got caught only because of littlefinger...

i hope they rubb in the fact that they almost died because of her and her trust in a whoremonger.

too much effort was placed on redeeming jaime. but to me, him killing a child out weighs any other good he may have done...

... why not kill jaime?

the main cause of the fall of the starks was the stupidity of catlyn and sansa... and to a smaller extent, ned, for believing and trusting in his wife's ex.(even if one sided)

Why does Jon suck at fighting hes gotten beat down in every fight he's been in if not for Ghost and Ser Barristan he would have died.

Me encantó. Sigo esperando otro capítulo

Catelyn raises her witch score to 100, apologizes, and so gets kudos?

The writing is very good. The story line good. The concept is great. Some of the character interactions seem mechanical, others seem very natural.

Overall, recommended.

He knocks out Jaime as punishment for Bran? How about stick him with a sword?

Jon finally tells Ned about the visions but holds back details. Why?

When has Jon ever been so passive? The writing is excellent, the plot very good, the setting descriptive, but Jon is spinning in circles. He’s either a coward or stupid. He’s letting his family suffer because he won’t open his mouth to anyone but Arya. This does not compute.

Jon has evidence that his dreams are prophetic. He says nothing. If he had two brain cells to rub together, he’d know he’d have to do something but does he open his mouth? No. Because he has an IQ of 80.

It's like watching "dumb and dumber" again. What a stupid story.