so jon didnt have more dreams of bran? that seems odd and unfair.
hmm now your using your brain boy .

Shame this was abandoned, really loved reading it. Adored the scenes with Jon and Ned. Thank you for what you did wrtie. Hopeu come back to it 3

Interesting story. You should continue it...

Hope that Jon becomes king and is paired with Myrcella.

i really really wanted ned to bring up the fact that they got caught only because of littlefinger...

i hope they rubb in the fact that they almost died because of her and her trust in a whoremonger.

too much effort was placed on redeeming jaime. but to me, him killing a child out weighs any other good he may have done...

... why not kill jaime?

the main cause of the fall of the starks was the stupidity of catlyn and sansa... and to a smaller extent, ned, for believing and trusting in his wife's ex.(even if one sided)

Why does Jon suck at fighting hes gotten beat down in every fight he's been in if not for Ghost and Ser Barristan he would have died.

Me encantó. Sigo esperando otro capítulo

Catelyn raises her witch score to 100, apologizes, and so gets kudos?

The writing is very good. The story line good. The concept is great. Some of the character interactions seem mechanical, others seem very natural.

Overall, recommended.

He knocks out Jaime as punishment for Bran? How about stick him with a sword?

Jon finally tells Ned about the visions but holds back details. Why?

When has Jon ever been so passive? The writing is excellent, the plot very good, the setting descriptive, but Jon is spinning in circles. He’s either a coward or stupid. He’s letting his family suffer because he won’t open his mouth to anyone but Arya. This does not compute.