Reviews for Says the Demon
ObsessedwithEyeballs chapter 1 . 8/4/2016
This is super good, although I haven't read the book or whatever it was that it was based on, I love the gothic mystery elements. Keep up the good work!
DutchessBatCat chapter 1 . 7/22/2016
I really like the concept of this story. You do very well in writing interactions between characters and dialogue. However, you could use some work on your descriptions of location and I would recommend finding a beta reader/proofreader to go through and help with the grammar and a few funky sentences in there.
DeathAngel221 chapter 1 . 7/21/2016
The story was fantastic, I was just looking for a good story and here you are just 2 hours ago. You should update soon. can't wait.