Reviews for Miso Soup
Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2017
Soo good..thank you..muahhh..! crying...
HuuskerDu chapter 1 . 8/9/2016
This is a good character sketch of the main trio. You captured Inaba's basic insecurity and her tendency to overthink everything (e.g., worrying that Taichi wanted to break up), as well as Iori's need to find herself before she could move on with her life. You totally teased us with Iori's new mysterious beau. I want to know more about him! Taichi seemed a bit bland as Mr. Generic Nice Guy, but the problem stems from the original LN more than anything.

The narrative style is very good and it flows well. It avoids the excessively talky dialog seen in most fanfics. I did find the POV shifts to be little distracting (also common in FFs). To fix you can simply restructure the existing well written narrations to use a consistent 3rd person onmiscient POV and you'll be fine. (Use italics for inner thoughts.)

Overall this is a nice little one-shot story and it is very well done.