Till the end
I was fed up with your use of -ly words
Hermione and Harry being so incapable in conveying emotions amd stumbling all around other than the point. So long sentences with complicated words were said with actual meaning lost somewhere
Since when did Krum got so deep, why not explain it clearly, or hint it normally
That was the feeling i got

Okay
I don't like this harry

This was really sweet, and totally believable. What a wonderful chap was Victor! And I have never seen better banter with Ron in any story anywhere ever! You had me laughing

This is technically a review of the whole story but I already posted one on ch 9 so anyways this was adorable and great as always so thanks I loved it

Wtf is this intro, don't be doing me like that Stanrick
This better be a bait and switch type situation

Y more angst :'(

noooo why so much angst

Denial is not just a river in Egypt

I enjoyed this.

Sorry, didn't realize this story took place during the TWT.

I don't understand half the words Hermione is saying. You've managed to make her insufferable x10 by using words no normal people would use on a daily basis, and shouldn't Cedric be dead?

Still, I see a little of canon Hermione nearing the end there, so here's to hoping.

Snape is an asswipe.

Frickin Snape! They were about to kiss and he ruined it and punished them on unfair grounds! Jealous, petty bastard.

Wait, Thresholds is already that old? dear god

Wholly perfect. I think I've read it before but this felt like the first time all over again, making my 2 hours commute pass by unnoticed. Merci!