Reviews for Massacre in the Dungeons
Ryan chapter 13 . 7/25
I liked this Lucius, better than any I've read before actually. It's nice, and understable, given the proper motivation.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/14
Just started chapter 2 and found out how selfish dumbledore is, it's actually kinda funny to see him as a self-absorbed, careless pr***...
Sorry for language but I'm so finishing this!
not a fan chapter 6 . 4/4
First I'm going to say that I'll finish reading the story...

second, what a way to ruin everything, the room of need found, the chamber of secrets found... both rooms have been unfound or almost unfound for centuries no matter how many times they searched for them and now they are found at the same time ? what a trash
Guest chapter 12 . 3/5
A feather that’s what did it that’s what killed Voldemort ok
jaqmaq77 chapter 2 . 12/31/2023
I'm enjoying the story, great start.

My friend had seven kids... Twenty years later,
three nurses, two work in the bank... One prostitute, and one in jail for burglary and GBH...
I have four... one is a hotel manager, one is a social worker, one is a housing officer and one is a beach bum without a beach... a moocher... a waste of space Ron Weasley/Draco Malfoy cross... Loaned him £200... and saw nothing of him for three years - and it was worth the 200... So siblings are all the same?
iacopo.passerini chapter 1 . 12/7/2023
Grande storia!
Complimenti!
ottimo lavoro!
gusjo chapter 11 . 11/6/2023
This story has been good but wtf was this triwizard nonsense? Seriously, the enemy of voldy is whatever teen wins the triwizard?
gusjo chapter 9 . 11/6/2023
Oh. This was such a perfect opportunity for manip Dumble to fake regret. Saying thay he made mistakes and was rightfully removed from Hogwarts because if you don't remove someone who makes mistakes then how do you ever stop incompetence.

I guess with only a few chapters left to go that wasn't really feasible, but the setup for it was so good here.
Clark959 chapter 13 . 8/15/2023
Papa bear protects his cub. Wondering if Lucius is promoting the pure blood agenda? Or just looking for more power.
Esmereilda chapter 12 . 7/8/2023
lol moldyshorts killed by a peacock feather XD
Esmereilda chapter 4 . 7/2/2023
and dumbles schemes cont to deteriorate
Esmereilda chapter 3 . 7/1/2023
and the abuse comes to light
Esmereilda chapter 2 . 7/1/2023
looks dumbles schemes are falling apart at the seams
Charlee56 chapter 13 . 5/22/2023
Well done!
Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 11 . 1/14/2023
Kudos, for the Horcrux removal idea!

You managed to both stick to canon AND come up with a safer idea than dumbledore's "let's hope the Hallows make him imortal" scheme. BRILLIANT! _

...and something any half-trained muggle med student with access to a heart-starter machine could have done.

CLEARLY dumbledore is either an idiot or have zero knowledge of muggles. And Hermione SHOULD have known.. but I can't remember if Harry ever told her he had to die to destroy the soul...

Anyway. Very good fic thus far. Especially kudos for the inter-character conflicts. They make the story more exiting, as it lacks other conflicts and obstacles that are hard to overcome. _

(It's a bit too smooth sailing, overall, so the person-to-person conflict manage to keep the story from dying in the classical Mary Sue boredom tral. _ )
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