Reviews for An Inuyasha story
elyon777 chapter 2 . 7/20/2013
you have the most awful spelling i have EVER seen and im only on chapter 2
me chapter 14 . 7/6/2013
horrible i didnt enjoy it at all i didnt even under stand most of it spelling and grammer is horrible im glad stockman doesnt own the caracters for real i would be so sad
katyra bryant chapter 14 . 6/1/2013
I love inuyasha you should add more to all the chapters.
shunny chapter 14 . 2/15/2013
well written but make sure it makes more sense cause you lost me in almost all of it and this dont make d**n sense
Thetomatoofthegroup chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
I dont mean to be mean, but this is kind of hard to read. Try making it paragraph form. If you fo that it will be much less confusing. :)
anna chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
ok... YOUR 11! AWESOME!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
love it im so like kagome i am also in love with inuyasha hes soooo hot
awesome chapter 14 . 7/13/2012
please write another chapter
Dovey chapter 2 . 7/9/2012
Hello fellow Inuyasha Fan!

A few tips,

If you're ever unsure about the spelling, look it up online! ] I'm sure that your story would seem better with proper grammar.
Secondly: It would make it better if you capitalized somethings...like people's NAMES. Or PLACES.
Third: Don't use HAH as much...it makes you seem really IMMATURE and YOUNG. Same thng goes it "yah."
*Yawn.
*Hmpf-d.
*I'm.
*Sure.
*I'll.

Use some commas and exclamation, man! Act like you're in the story! It will make ever thing seem more interesting.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/3/2012
it's really annoying when you write all in one!
Can't you write in paragraphs or something?
Guest chapter 4 . 7/1/2012
u need to wright the words corectlt
creep chapter 13 . 6/16/2012
who is cozuna
creep chapter 8 . 6/5/2012
u spelt kitty's name rong it kirara
creep chapter 7 . 6/5/2012
wat happend to that 0 guy im very curios
creep chapter 5 . 6/5/2012
haha baby!
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