Reviews for An Inuyasha story
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2016
I'm 10 _. (/-uu-\\) -duck face
Guest chapter 1 . 2/18/2016
It's ok for your first one
KittyMourner chapter 2 . 7/20/2013
you have the most awful spelling i have EVER seen and im only on chapter 2
me chapter 14 . 7/6/2013
horrible i didnt enjoy it at all i didnt even under stand most of it spelling and grammer is horrible im glad stockman doesnt own the caracters for real i would be so sad
katyra bryant chapter 14 . 6/1/2013
I love inuyasha you should add more to all the chapters.
shunny chapter 14 . 2/15/2013
well written but make sure it makes more sense cause you lost me in almost all of it and this dont make d**n sense
ViralFandom chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
I dont mean to be mean, but this is kind of hard to read. Try making it paragraph form. If you fo that it will be much less confusing. :)
anna chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
ok... YOUR 11! AWESOME!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
love it im so like kagome i am also in love with inuyasha hes soooo hot
awesome chapter 14 . 7/13/2012
please write another chapter
Dovey chapter 2 . 7/9/2012
Hello fellow Inuyasha Fan!

A few tips,

If you're ever unsure about the spelling, look it up online! ] I'm sure that your story would seem better with proper grammar.
Secondly: It would make it better if you capitalized people's NAMES. Or PLACES.
Third: Don't use HAH as makes you seem really IMMATURE and YOUNG. Same thng goes it "yah."

Use some commas and exclamation, man! Act like you're in the story! It will make ever thing seem more interesting.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/3/2012
it's really annoying when you write all in one!
Can't you write in paragraphs or something?
Guest chapter 4 . 7/1/2012
u need to wright the words corectlt
creep chapter 13 . 6/16/2012
who is cozuna
creep chapter 8 . 6/5/2012
u spelt kitty's name rong it kirara
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