Hi runeprincess
this was a fun read, and I enjoyed your writting.
I hope you feel better and maybe one day you will see this and will lift your spirits. This is my hope at least!

No! I'm torn now. Naruto or Sasuke? I can't decide

Wow, this is new. Everytime I read OC as the main character, he or she ended up with Naruto's team. I look forward how this was going to go

I really hope Naruto got with Hinata

Thank God!

I know it's been a long story but after I read the first chapter, I already like it and really hope Hizashi would be alive

The premise had potential.. but your story .. nicely put, sucks. It just reiterates the canon story with slight changes. The mc is kinda useless. Just wasted a couple hours of my life.

good story

I knew this story is not continuing but I just want to say that NaruHina is the best ship!

fck you too ...
telling us that you wont change canon in a fanfic that also has an si with prior knowledge is like telling the readers to go f themselves... if i wanted to read canon naruto i wouldn't be hear reading this shit.. just go and read the manga or watch anime.

Talk-no-Jutsu is what keep him alive! Without it he would had been kill alot earlier.

Its fine if you can't write, hopefully you'll find that joy again. I know I'm pretty late saying this but Hope your better now, if not hope you get better soon. :D

Weak, useless and dumb.

"I'm just excited for the Chunin Exams," Sasuke replies. "There are some many strong people to fight against. It is a freak show."

'Some many'? The heck is some many?

Well, I'm sorry to hear that, but if that's your decision then it's fine. Mental health is important. I've got to say, it was a very interesting and fun story, you really did a great job. Most SI stories are just an angsty rehashing of canon with maybe minor details changed, but you really made a lot of interesting changes! Team Ten made sense, and Sasuke and Hinata's friendship was nice to see. You really have a gift for writing!