This story's MC-chan is dumber than a rock. She's gone too native, coupled with some fix-it syndrome.. while she's not a disaster, it's still pretty bad.

Dude... A sick Hinata? wtf? There is nowhere to prove this idea of your author...

Her abilities are inconsistent . At one moment she is super then another she's weaker than sakura. Also it seems like ur making other people tell how strong or talented she is without any proper action to show it.

It's extremely sad how common it is for good stories to end Suddenly, I to hope you eventually finish it and I shall bookmark it just incase.

...do...do you have any idea...any idea at all...how easy it would've been to Gentle fist in in the spine when thet switched with the kunai?

Like I understand this fight is supposed to be Sakura's moment to shine and all but...it's not at all practical cause they had her Dead to rights she definitely wasn't expecting the bootleg flying raijin.

The positice definitely out way the negatives but still, I don't get why you chose to not make her as strong as she should be.

First with a nameless desease/condition, that you use to justify why she is not as physically strong as could have been.

Then with a sprained wrist that should have healed in the 3 day period, because she is not a normal person...
(It's been stated on multiple occasions that shinobi heal faster than normal civilian because of their chakra).

Lastly (The thing that lowered my opinion of the story)
She knows about future events and how OP rhe shippuden antagonists are but hasn't planned out a simple training regiment to increase her chakra reserves (stamina), and has only just decided to take advantage of shadow clones.

The thing that bordered me most about this chapter is the fact that she shouldn't have been able to shake off the Air palms because it has been shown taking down Jonin level people with just 1 hit.
And speaking of Air palms, the air palms only became available to branch family members after the 2half year time skip from OG Naruto to Shippuden.
Which makes me wonder why you (Author-Sama) have chosen to right a Hyuga centric story but without first making sure that you have near perfect understanding of both the Gentle Fist and the Hyuga clan.

Honestly I'm disappointed with Hinata's lack of strength...

OC Hinata is supposedly better than OG Hinata but soo far your Hinata is really underwhelming.

I like that you shuffled the teams but I have to admit that your team build doesn't make sense.

Team 10 is supposed to be a super effective matchup and it doesn't make sense why you changed them.

I can understand why you would want to mix up team Kakashi and team Kurenai but there was no real reason to mess with the InoShikaCho.

I will be forever waiting for more

comment to your disclaimer for chapter 8. I AGREE! Love a spicy Shino fic!

Team 7 doesn’t make sense. While skill sets are good to base teams off you would think they would base it off personality too. I mean I can understand that Chunin may not face the same issue but Genin are very much still immature and learning how to be “Shonobi.” Also I’m unsure how Ino really fits with Naruto & Sasuke. Info’s clan techniques are more suited for capture or interrogation. Hell they don’t have a Nara that can control her body why she’s unconscious.

Sakura would have been a better fit for Team 7 or 8. I honestly thought she’d be on Team 8 because Team 8 has a Sensai who specializes in Genjutsu.

i honestly hoped to see a better performance than canon Hinata, but it always comes back to canon results and thats despite the changes the Author made... its just sad.

the teams make no sense, what are they supposed to specialiase in? Team 7 were supposed to be heavy hitters, Team 8 were the tracking team and Team 10 was the Ino-Shika-Cho formation (mix of Infiltration/assasasination and a heavy hitter)... the current teams are like the author trying to deviate from canon, but in a realy shitty way.

why is she, a reincarnate, act like canon Hinata? fucking stand up for yourself.

useless things

cute play date