Reviews for Playing the Role of the Byakugan Princess
N.G MornStar chapter 26 . 3/4
The positice definitely out way the negatives but still, I don't get why you chose to not make her as strong as she should be.

First with a nameless desease/condition, that you use to justify why she is not as physically strong as could have been.

Then with a sprained wrist that should have healed in the 3 day period, because she is not a normal person...
(It's been stated on multiple occasions that shinobi heal faster than normal civilian because of their chakra).

Lastly (The thing that lowered my opinion of the story)
She knows about future events and how OP rhe shippuden antagonists are but hasn't planned out a simple training regiment to increase her chakra reserves (stamina), and has only just decided to take advantage of shadow clones.

The thing that bordered me most about this chapter is the fact that she shouldn't have been able to shake off the Air palms because it has been shown taking down Jonin level people with just 1 hit.
And speaking of Air palms, the air palms only became available to branch family members after the 2half year time skip from OG Naruto to Shippuden.
Which makes me wonder why you (Author-Sama) have chosen to right a Hyuga centric story but without first making sure that you have near perfect understanding of both the Gentle Fist and the Hyuga clan.
N.G MornStar chapter 10 . 3/3
Honestly I'm disappointed with Hinata's lack of strength...

OC Hinata is supposedly better than OG Hinata but soo far your Hinata is really underwhelming.

I like that you shuffled the teams but I have to admit that your team build doesn't make sense.

Team 10 is supposed to be a super effective matchup and it doesn't make sense why you changed them.

I can understand why you would want to mix up team Kakashi and team Kurenai but there was no real reason to mess with the InoShikaCho.
Liva1 chapter 47 . 2/27
I will be forever waiting for more
LunaDragAngel chapter 8 . 2/18
comment to your disclaimer for chapter 8. I AGREE! Love a spicy Shino fic!
ToxicViper chapter 10 . 1/2
Team 7 doesn’t make sense. While skill sets are good to base teams off you would think they would base it off personality too. I mean I can understand that Chunin may not face the same issue but Genin are very much still immature and learning how to be “Shonobi.” Also I’m unsure how Ino really fits with Naruto & Sasuke. Info’s clan techniques are more suited for capture or interrogation. Hell they don’t have a Nara that can control her body why she’s unconscious.

Sakura would have been a better fit for Team 7 or 8. I honestly thought she’d be on Team 8 because Team 8 has a Sensai who specializes in Genjutsu.
MoinLeute chapter 26 . 1/1
i honestly hoped to see a better performance than canon Hinata, but it always comes back to canon results and thats despite the changes the Author made... its just sad.
MoinLeute chapter 10 . 1/1
the teams make no sense, what are they supposed to specialiase in? Team 7 were supposed to be heavy hitters, Team 8 were the tracking team and Team 10 was the Ino-Shika-Cho formation (mix of Infiltration/assasasination and a heavy hitter)... the current teams are like the author trying to deviate from canon, but in a realy shitty way.
MoinLeute chapter 7 . 1/1
why is she, a reincarnate, act like canon Hinata? fucking stand up for yourself.
ashikbari15 chapter 20 . 11/2/2022
useless things
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 1 . 10/23/2022
cute play date
Guest chapter 10 . 10/14/2022
Chapter 10 what the F is this team arrangement? It doesn't make sense to me, It's like shaking all the genin team, I mean yow what. You feel me.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2022
Hi. Great writing by the way, but I was wondering if you would change the rating to M or would consider using a trigger warning for each chapter. I read this when I was 12, and had vivid nightmares after reading the beginning of the sexual assault scene. Please change the age rating or add a trigger warning at the very beginning. It’s hard to read fanfiction when you don’t trust the writers to rate things appropriately, that being said, you have a nice writing style and I hope you continue to write in future but please be more considerate because younger people use this platform.
Silverfox chapter 7 . 8/13/2022
This is too frustrating!(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ
Guest chapter 6 . 5/23/2022
- I highly doubt things are going to change just because I decide to make some friends. -
Famous jinx line
GhostReader611 chapter 1 . 5/11/2022
love the chapter.. your work is awesome! 333
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