Its fine if you can't write, hopefully you'll find that joy again. I know I'm pretty late saying this but Hope your better now, if not hope you get better soon. :D

Weak, useless and dumb.

"I'm just excited for the Chunin Exams," Sasuke replies. "There are some many strong people to fight against. It is a freak show."

'Some many'? The heck is some many?

Well, I'm sorry to hear that, but if that's your decision then it's fine. Mental health is important. I've got to say, it was a very interesting and fun story, you really did a great job. Most SI stories are just an angsty rehashing of canon with maybe minor details changed, but you really made a lot of interesting changes! Team Ten made sense, and Sasuke and Hinata's friendship was nice to see. You really have a gift for writing!

Why didn't she activate her Byakugan to negate Itachi's Mangekyo Sharingan? It's this typeof stuff that always gets me in these stories with the Byakyugan you can see chakra therefore genjutsu cannot affect you while it's open since you would just see the chackra...I'm not saying she owuld be able to defeat Itachi all I'm saying is with the byakugan activated there is no need to worry about genjutsu.

so kakashi

"density"

Shikamaru is pretty cool.

I have never seen an Ino one tbh

I really enjoyed reading your fic. I was a little sad to read that it is on hiatus but I understand why you can't write anymore. I am glad you are taking care of yourself and I hope you are feeling better.
I wish you all the best and I thank you for sharing your fic with us !
Milie

hum you sure forget a lot. but i guess i will try to forget it as well if i am in her position

geez she is not cute at all

Fuck u...u suck author...:

This fic is so great! Happy I found it! Been reading it all day and night!

I NEED HER TO TELL SASUKE SHE GOT ASSAULTED. THEN I NEED HIM TO GET ANGRY. VERY VERY ANGRY