Reviews for The Power of the Potters
Mark chapter 14 . 3/19
A small point. If you are not familiar with a language, don't use it—not even to modify it. 'Potters' is plural, therefore, 'Potters dormientes numquam titillandi.' Latin adjectives and verbs change in relation to their subjects. Alternatively, you could have left 'Potter' in the singular and nothing else would change; it would then be understood as 'A sleeping Potter...'
I have encountered far worse Latin, French, and German (excluding some atrocious English) on this web-site; I'm still reading and that is what counts.
Dalriaden chapter 11 . 2/15
at-nightfall chapter 17 . 1/15
On apprenticeships:
the numers of apprentices a master can use and educate relies seriously on the size and the setup of his shop.
My father as a heating craftsman usually had two apprentices, which most of the time went with the two senior journeymen.
There were few jobs, where one journeymen could use two apprentices at the same time, and during the summer break and sometimes on Saturdays I helped with these as an untrained helper.

Small shops without any journeyman usually take only one apprentice at a time.

In the company I work for, we can handle three apprentices, preferably one in each year. Having two apprentices in the same year is more work, and can create problems with the schedules.

Regards and thank you for writing the story
Guest chapter 21 . 1/13
I was disappointed that we saw a scene with Vigil and his wife, and Ron's wet dream, but we never got to see those special moments of Harry & Hermione.

Cosmyk Angel
Guest chapter 20 . 1/13
This chapter was so beautiful.
Cosmyk Angel
Guest chapter 19 . 1/11
As much as I complain about what an asshole "Lord" Harry could be, I still love this story and will still continue rereading it when it pops up and...will still continue bitching about Harry, lol.
Guest chapter 14 . 1/10
Are we supposed to be seeing Harry as the evil new Light Lord b/c that's how this is playing out... a jackass. An ill-mannered, rude, "listen to me because I'm super-speshel" jackass at that.
Guest chapter 13 . 1/10
It never was made very clear how Harry was rescued from the people who stole him out of Hogwarts. It is also very clear that Harry couldn't care less about Hermione or her opinions.

Hermione unfortunately has lost who she is because Harry is pretty. Very disappointed in both characters.

Harry is a rude, arrogant pureblooded asshole and Hermione's vagina juice has removed her spine.
Guest chapter 12 . 1/10
Lordly Lording Harry sure does have a nasty habit of insulting and shooing away the people who care most for him, doesn't he? Like, fuck Sirius who would have been very worried about his GODSON but Harry couldn't care less.
RexCaldoran chapter 21 . 1/12
ok I just binged this story and I have to say it's afaik a truly unique take on the lord potter trope. and I brilliant way too. I really enjoyed it.
Guest chapter 13 . 9/26/2022
Sadly, the writer of this story really, REALLY needs to work on writing...romance. Harry just KEEPS being a jerkoff to Hermione - he just keeps it up! And yet he expects her to adore him anyway? He's an egotistical jackass to her. Normally I'm totally H/Hr but I think in this instance Hermione would be far, far better off with Neville. He at least seems to care about her and doesn't actively work to hurt her feelings like Harry does.
Guest chapter 11 . 9/26/2022
I would ask why Poppy was offed but considering she was in cahoots with Albus' brain-rape plans...
Guest chapter 9 . 9/26/2022
Well, given how Harry tends to treat Hermione now, it's no wonder she feels more comfy with Neville.
Mikeblade chapter 8 . 8/22/2022
if he can use the dark mark for tracking and snape has one voldy would know exactly where they are all ready would that also bypass the fidly thingy
MotekElm chapter 11 . 8/18/2022
Exciting story. focuses on Harry.
the author doesn't seem to like Hermione much and treats her like JKR treated Ginny in canon.
still, it's integrating.
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