Reviews for The Power of the Potters |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful and bloody fantastic story so far. Reminded me when i had read HP AND THE DAFT MORONS. Hope,this one is not abandoned. |
![]() ![]() We never saw Harry and hermione have a conformation about what happen at the train and why hermione was distant. Did he ever understand he was rude and didn't stop his cousin from doing or saying things she shouldn't have. Also did we find out why Abbott was all sad us she related to hermione and I missed it. Otherwise I really liked this story. I'm glad you added that last bit about the siren potter because I would of added that to the list of what was missing. Oh did hermione learn his cousin is the reason for the attack at hogwarts. Because I hope Harry is honest to his wife and not keeping such secrets. Didn't like his cousin at all. She was trying to replace hermione from the very beginning. She seemed bratty and immature and not a god fit for Harry. But I usually only like Harry with hermione, daphne, Luna, fleur or tonks. Sometimes I don't mind Astoria or gabby. But that's it. |
![]() ![]() good thing in my story that faggot will fail the potters will live the long bottoms attack fail and all dumbldores plots will be known |
![]() ![]() ![]() Traitor Jonas his evil |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumbles is still plotting the old coot never stops |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumbles is going downnnnnnn! Awesome! |
![]() ![]() Please, for the love of all that is holy, don't continue this. I know - you think that you want to write a story that redeems one of the most repulsive characters I've ever seen created - but just don't. I personally am not sure its possible for you to create a three dimensional character - let alone build enough interest to make this one particularly interesting. You wrote a better than decent story. Why ruin it with this lame sequel? About a particularly unlikable character? Or is it a self insert? *shudders* |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow this book...was INSANE! I loved it, the characters were awesome, I personally love it when potters are the powerful. incredible writing. thank you so much for writing this. good luck on future works |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bad drama and it's Harry. Not Harold, Henri, Harcourt, Harrison, or any other clichéd nonsense. Skip. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How would Jonas get involved with V that quickly? |
![]() ![]() ![]() JUST WOW. Loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have enjoyed this story very much. Thank you |
![]() ![]() i haven't read any fanfic like this before, so i was very curious about it with a quick look at page 21. But it was not really what i expected even if it is writen very good. There so many gaps through the story it's annoying cause it only gives off that more is wanted to know how or what? Weasley's share for example so much is missing. But there is only one thing that really bother's me so annoying/frustrating and really should be informed and adressed cause it's about ''potters'' and how h/hr come into the picture for page 21. That is the missing interaction and missing info between harry&hermione frienship to relationship to wedding. (what was there not talking and mending about?) He spends more time with snape very odd or others, through learning/researching then with hermione. wtf as if he suddenly has no need for at all so damn strange. the whole dynamic and closeness they have in many fanfics is not there. Whatever his family magiks does with his cousin, the way she treats hermione and he doesn't even stand up for her (later yes but still) And what about his age? hermione might be a year older through 3e year time turner, but harry 2 years of the bubble. Even later he still uses it you don't explain it later but how old are they cause it seems to me harry is suddenly years older then her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for answering my 'Lordy' question at the end there. |
![]() ![]() I can honestly say this is the best "Extended Potter Family" fanfic I have ever read. It is also the only one I have ever been able to read more than a bit of, because it did not feel like a large heaping of "deus ex machina"s right from the start. It truly felt like a story that could be believed. Thank you for creating this, and subsequently sharing it with us! |