I give up; too confusing and wordy, especially with the organisation of Hogwarts etc.

The stories, like this one seems to be going, where Harry matures with a strong possibility to finish Moldyshorts, and then Moldy gets more power/stronger enemies/out of this possible world evil, turn me right off. I will try a few more chapters, just in case.

The two halves of this chapter do not match in actions. I have thought that this was an excellent story up to this chapter, but I am not so sure now

DROP THE EFFING N.

When it comes to a Headbastard, the death of an innocent boy is ever his goal.

Thank you for the beautiful story... I will admit I have always favored a Harry/Hermione pairing. I have scanned mostly all of the HP Fanfic for a complete HP/HG story and this is my favorite of all of them.
THANK YOU

PS Yeah that Henriette Potter is one hell of a biiiarrrcchhh! Kick that bitch to the kerb!
EWWW nonoonoo inbredding don't think sooooo...

I do not like Harry/Hermione pairings, but I liked the story overall.

Loved it!

Harry is human so it only probable that it would affect him! But it will soon be overcome with the knowledge that they made their beds and suffered the consequences!

Henriette will not take prisoners! Hate Poppy died but she sided with Dumbledore!

I am loving this! Just hate there is a traitor in the Potter family!

I bet some of their asses are puckered so tight you would need a sledgehammer to drive a needle up their arses!

The knife is sinking deeper and deeper into Malfoy and Dumbledore!

Oh I hope Henriette and Harry are far enough apart thst they can get together!

Oh, Dumbledore is so screwed!

Yes! Help arrives!