Omg! I absolutely adore this!

Um, no, Harry is NOT someone Hermione would want to know. He's a misogynistic bastard with no respect for Hermione or her feelings. She's barely a blip on his radar and won't even give her a chance to speak. He's rude to her, presumptuous of her, and very disrespectful of her, and I have lost every bit of respect for your Hermione that I might have had for her caving at the last moment. She's a mewling, spineless, sub and NOBODY wants that.

TL;DR: Harry is an arrogant, disrespectful prick and Hermione has lost her fucking spine. I loathe what you've made both characters into with this mess.

Love when Sev, Siri, Remmy, and insert character have their own little un-Albus group!

My grandfather's name was Frank Cecil and the last name did, indeed, start with a P.

good story

You said comprised instead of compromised when referring to Hideout.

This was an amazing story. I loved how you fleshed out the extended Potter family, family magik, and the relationships throughout the piece. Each of the characters were excellently written and the storyline was very interesting. All in all it was a great story. However I would have enjoyed seeing Harry learn from his family and how the fireside chat went. Also some things, like the extensive description about Snape's new potions lab and Narcissa's garden, seemed unnecessary. Going further into the family dynamic during the beginning, the life and viewpoint of Harry after certain events, and the politics would have done better to me. Either way I do hope you continue writing. The teaser about the Harry/Henriette story was very enjoyable and I would love to one day read it. I'm very partial to Dark Harry stories. So please let me know if you ever do write and post it

Finally! I have been waiting for Harry to tell that arrogant bitch Henriette that she will NEVER be his lady potter. I am not sure that I agree with Hermione being his lady potter either but the sooner she curbs her arrogant behaviour, the better.

And where will this leave Neville? He acts as if he is in love with hermione or was he just acting as her "Chaperone"?

Marry off the pureblood traitorous bitch Henriette to his mortal pureblood enemy Draco - a perfect Marriage made in heaven or will that be A Marriage made in hell?

GRRR Hermione's arrogance about how Magic should not be kept secret is Very annoying.

Does she go around to every (Muggle) corporation demanding that their patented inventions being available to everyone? NO she doesnt.

And yet she (an unknown litle upstart mudblood) demands that Family magic be freely available to all magical people. And she does not even BELONG to any of those families!

great job on the story thank you

nice job thanks

wow getting good thanks

thank you for your time and talented

thank you

loving it thank you