Reviews for halo: primal
pushtrak1 chapter 1 . 11/14/2016
Ever heard of capital letters?
haydenunstopable chapter 3 . 11/10/2016
I like how I wrote my apereance what do you think. and a reviewer asked for no more of special author aperances so that's the last one maybe for several chapter
021448740041987 chapter 3 . 10/9/2016
I agree with this story - intelligent life is hard to find XDXD
Batmd chapter 3 . 9/2/2016
I hope this is the only 4th wall braking moment i hate dose ...unless there in a deadpool fanfiction
Batmd chapter 3 . 8/17/2016
What the hell was that ?
Batmd chapter 1 . 8/15/2016
One line , ONE LINE ! what the hell. You got my hopes up and everything and you give me this crap !
021448740041987 chapter 2 . 8/16/2016
i wish u luck and update soon, i luv it!
021448740041987 chapter 1 . 8/16/2016
Wow, this is great i hop u update soon plz
Ded acc chapter 1 . 7/26/2016
You only have one line of dialogue... and that's it. Are you unintentionally trolling the community?
Reichtangle chapter 1 . 7/25/2016
...don't do one wants to see this...and also it seems you're not a writer so please don't do this you only have 60 words in the first chapeter...and only one line of dialogue...please don't do this