|Reviews for The Great Medic|
| SilverDragon1218 chapter 22 . 6/17
I want moreeeee! I’m looking forward to when you continue updating again. Will Sasuke be ok? What will the Hokage’s desision be? What about Gaara? Too many questions! This was very good though.
| pupstarstar chapter 22 . 6/9
I adore this story! The comradely between Team 7, and the relationship between Shikamaru and Naruto are great!
| pupstarstar chapter 15 . 6/9
You did great. No, it was not rushed.
| pupstarstar chapter 13 . 6/9
Awww! So cute!
| Skye wolfe chapter 22 . 6/7
Love the story so far. Also I wanted to let you know there is a good deal of info on the technique on the wiki
| Sakihinata chapter 22 . 5/30
Ooh, and a decision is reached on Naruto's side ;)
| Nekoyasha12 chapter 22 . 5/29
Hiruzen is being far to soft again. He basically doomed the Elemental Nations when he failed to strike down Orochimaru when he had the chance. And now it seems to about to make the same mistake but in regards with Tsunade in not calling her back. I mean he’s the bloody Hokage! She may be powerful and his student but she’s first and foremost a shinobi of the Leaf. HIS shinobi.
After I read Hiruzen part this scene instantly came too mind as I suddenly zoned out into it:
Shikamaru glared murderously at the Hokage, ignoring everyone else present. “You’re the fucking Hokage! Do you’re job and grow a fucking spine!”
“Shikamaru!” Asuma snapped, attempting to rein in his student but the raven only seem to hear and see Hiruzen.
“Don’t think I don’t know. I see how this damn village treats him. Even though Naruto busts his ass to help them that still don’t give a damn!” The shadow users eyes became ice. “If Naruto dies because of your weak will…” The teen trailed offer before snapping. “None of this would be happening if you had just killed Orochimaru! But no, you let him fucking escape!”
“That’s enough Genin Nara!” Asuma ordered, placing a firm had on the boys shoulder only to have a shadow slap is away. Everyone stared awed eyed at the display. Something the should be possible and yet Shikamaru was doing so subconsciously.
Dark eyes gleamed with barley contained animistic rage. The silence the permeated the room was only filled with the harsh hissing breath of the shadow Genin Shikaku could only stare down at his son was bewilderment.
“You get Tsunade back,” came the teens, almost demonic-like growl, causing the others to flinch. “Because if Naruto dies due too your idiocy I will make you and the rest of this village regret it.”
With that shadows suddenly enveloped the teen before sinking into the floor and disappearing. Leaving behind roller-coaster ride of chaotic emotions within the walls of the Hokage’s office.
I could see Naruto telling Shikamaru what he has inside him after the Wave mission (since they have about a month after they return before the Chunin exams) and Shikamaru putting together why Kakashi, Hiruzen and even some of the other Jonin(who become privy to the information) are behaving oddly around Naruto or when talking about his medic abilities.
I can also see his exploding as such do to the fact I’ve noticed in your fic he doesn’t seem to handle large amounts of emotional buildup all that well. Mainly channeling it in over stressing himself or high anxiety and even fear at one point. So I can see him exploding like these even at the Hokage since Naruto makes him feel a happiness he hasn’t before and finding out his love might die due to his leaders weak will into doing what needs to be do just because he feels sorry for his student. So yeah, at least with this fic I can envision Shikamaru blowing up like that. But also to later feel embarrassed but refusing to feel shame since he did what he did he save his love.
As for the team 7 part: Damn! That's a twist. It'd be kool if Haku appeared and was interested and aided. XD
| elisalove chapter 22 . 5/28
So good, I wish it was longer. I can’t wait for the next chapter, please update so.
| sgriffin730 chapter 22 . 5/28
good chapter wish it was longer and didn't feel like a filler but i love this story
| TigrezzTail chapter 22 . 5/27
I do find it heartwarming that Hiruzen is struggling with his decision. Even if we know that he already knows the answer, he just desperate enough to hope someone else can find an alternate solution for it.
| swordsmanwielder chapter 22 . 5/27
Whoa, it's getting dark there on this chapter but how does naruto be doing to make it safe in time to catch up to his teammates, and having to find solutions to keep sasuke alive. Anyway, good luck on the next chapter and then take the time to do what you need to do and all will be fine.
| cyiusblack chapter 22 . 5/27
| xXHacksourceXx chapter 22 . 5/27
I beautiful heart wrenching chapter. I am not going to lie, it made me cry a little bit.
| One Autumn Leaf chapter 22 . 5/27
Yes another chapter!
| Leah Reid Whitlock chapter 22 . 5/27
Thank you so much for the update! Can’t wait for the next chapter!